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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-09-23 09:47 PM



The Next Time
~*Marge Tindal*~

You came in so cocky,
strutting all over the place.
Acting like I should fall
flat upon my face.

You said you wanted me
to be yours and no one else's.
I said, "No thank you, boy."
I'm not falling in your trances.

You said that I'd be sorry
and that other girls would want you so.
Well, don't let me stop you,
Hurry up and go !

You thought that I would want you
and you're also wrong about that.
Hit the doorway running
and don't forget your hat !

Let me fill you in
on the message in this rhyme
The next time that I want you
will be the first time !



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2000-09-23 10:03 PM


Jeez, Marge!!! Couldn't you at least have e-mailed this to me or something instead of making it so public???? I'm so mortified....
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-09-23 10:13 PM


Balladeer~
LOL !  
Check your e-mail address ... it came back !

Returned mail: User unknown
----- The following addresses had permanent fatal errors ----- Balladeer@BS.com
LOL !
You KNOW I love you -
privately and publicly!
~*Marge*~


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Corinne
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3 posted 2000-09-23 10:15 PM


This is adorable, Marge, I love it!

Corinne

vlraynes
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4 posted 2000-09-23 10:17 PM



marge-
  WOW!  this one certainly packs a harsh
  punch.  i like very much.     i hope you
  and balladeer can work things out...lol.  

  -vicky  



"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


JamesMichael
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5 posted 2000-09-23 10:28 PM


Funny and interesting Marge...you can't blame a guy for trying....James
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6 posted 2000-09-23 10:34 PM


Now Marge, you know 'Deer's heart gets mushy when LJA isn't kicking him around...and by the way, 'Deer's e: is bigbuck@ROTFLMAO .com

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


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7 posted 2000-09-23 10:45 PM


ROFL!!!!! Balladeer@BS.com!!! A lot of people might agree with ya on that one!!! You're a treasure, Marge!  
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8 posted 2000-09-23 11:05 PM


Corinne~
Thanks, gal !
It was just a little spin-off of a line I
heard on TV tonight !

Vicky~
LOL !
Me and Balladeer are always goofing off !
He's my favorite goof !
And it's so easy to push his button -

James~
It's just a funny !

Karilea~
LOL !
Oh, I've got his number alright !

Balladeer~
I LUV YOU !
~*Marge*~





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Wilfred Yeats
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9 posted 2000-09-23 11:17 PM


I learned there are some Marge 'buttons' one should never push - (shame on you 'deer )  
(good one Marge )

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10 posted 2000-09-23 11:21 PM


Marge, I know this guy who's just like that...(Romeo)...thanks everyone for the laughs I got from this string.
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11 posted 2000-09-23 11:29 PM


Marge, great poem on putting HIM in his place!  Loved it!!  

sp

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12 posted 2000-09-24 12:16 PM


Good evening Marge,
Pluleaze Marge, now everyone knows! My goodness, it's now all over the airways. But, I didn't know that Balladeer was involved too! Oh darn!

Mark Bohannan
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13 posted 2000-09-24 01:51 AM


Whew.....so glad to find out it was Balladeer and not me.....but remembered that the last time I was there I DIDN'T wear my hat anyway.  Ya had me scared there Marge baby and please don't tell my sweet (that I forgot to wear my hat, that is)...she would be so ashamed of me.LOLOL
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14 posted 2000-09-24 02:03 AM


Oh Myyyy..the replies in here just kill me sometimes.........LMAO

AS for this poem........YOU GOT THE POWER GIRL!!!  I love it when we put "them" in their place......the sad thing is....it's usually when we do that they end up wanting us more then ever.....LOL...And they say woman are complex........

Jenn E

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15 posted 2000-09-24 02:05 AM


Marge
  Why did you have to put us all in place that none of us want to be.  You could have been a little more tactful in your poetry.LOL
  This was excellent as always Marge.

Garfield

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16 posted 2000-09-24 09:02 AM


Wilfred~
Balladeer can push my buttons any day of the week ...
and twice on Sundays !

Dixie~
Glad to share our smiles with you.

SnowPants~
Glad you liked it.

Bill~
Well, Grandma always said -
'A man doesn't look under the bed,
unless he's hid there a time or two !'


MarkB~
LOL !
A hatless cowboy ... hmmmmm !

JennE~
Glad you liked it and yes, they are funny
in their replies.

GGRN~
Oh, oh ...
Yeah !  I'm know for my tact, alright !
LOL !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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17 posted 2000-09-24 09:05 AM


LOL...why do I have the feeling it's going to be a very ticklish Sunday?...

Karilea
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18 posted 2000-09-24 09:17 AM


Marge this is great, what a put down, and I love it. Certainly packs a punch, no mistaking the message at all, oh how I wish I'd had this a few months ago. Still what's that saying 'if wishes were horses beggers would ride'.
                                    

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19 posted 2000-09-24 11:40 AM


Terrific poem, Marge!! Whew, is it great to be here reading and replying! Keep em coming!

Love and hugs,
Your Lil' Lizzie


*now let's see if this darn password works*!!


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."


Marge Tindal
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20 posted 2000-09-24 11:47 AM


Karilea~
Got a *giggle* to share ??  

Marsha~
Glad you liked it !  

LilLizzie~  
Now my face is lit with the biggest smile
I've had in a long time !
I could just hug your little neck !
{{{{{HUGS}}}}
Love you my favorite little friend
in the WHOLE WIDE WORLD !
I'm soooooooooooooo happy !  
Enjoy and come back in here more often.
You'd better send me your password
so the NEXT time you can't remember it
I'll have it for you !  
Thanks for being you and for loving me.
~*Marge*~


< !signature-->

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                     noles1@totcon.com                       




[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 09-24-2000).]

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21 posted 2000-09-24 11:49 AM


Marge--You tell em...it's one of your special charms..love ya, gal!!!
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22 posted 2000-09-24 11:50 AM


lol this was really cute marge way to go...

If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
Vlh.
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23 posted 2000-09-24 11:54 AM


you tell him Marge haa..good one  
Marge Tindal
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24 posted 2000-09-24 06:23 PM


Martie~
Yeah ... that's me - all charm ! Yah !

Tori~
I love it when you show up to play at Passion's.
Need to do it more often.
Glad you got a smile out of it.

Victoria~
Pleased to know you liked it.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Paula Finn
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25 posted 2000-09-28 04:11 PM


Marge...WOW you tell him girl...HAHAHAHA...I LIKE IT.
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26 posted 2000-11-12 01:41 AM


Loved the flair in this one Marge  


Marge Tindal
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27 posted 2000-11-12 01:56 AM


Paula~
Think he got the message ?  

Dani~
You're always uncovering the bestest stuff !  
What a gal !
Thanks, friend.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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