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Your Vase (re post to Mark's Challange)
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Your Vase (re post to Mark's Challange) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Your Vase This love that I feel so deeply inside Grows inside my spirit every Day and through out every night I want you here, by my side for all of Eternity... though a thousands lifetimes And yet that would still not be enough time To overcome the wonderment that is here in My heart at what you do for me. You make Feel as if I can fly, soar over the earth on On a high of love and life. Your love is Like a rose blossoming and growing In beauty and elegance. I am your Vase. Holding you up, waning to Be your home, all your comfort Wanting to return all you give To me. I want to give back all the joy and warmth that only you can deliver in the night. Our love so delicate, but so strong, withstanding the world, destined to be. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
RP, lovely... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RosePetals~ I already watered these flowers in Open #9, but glad to do it again ! Stands to reason that someone with the name of RosePetals should have chosen to do a lovely vase. Love it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
RP this is lovely imagery in this picture. Welcome to the Marge club. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Suhshine - Thank you  I'm so glad you liked it Marge -  Thank you again for stopping in! I'm happy that you liked it.Kethry - Wow.. that jus might be the best compliment I've ever recieved! It is an honor to held in the same respect as Marge. Thank you |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good evening rosepetals25, rosepetals25, you write the sweetest poems that I have read. They do come from your heart, as I can tell. Keep writing and don't stop, for you know that this someone will be there to read them. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
With all the watering from here and open 9 and all of the warmth and sunshine of YOUR poem then I have no doubt that this will be blooming for a long long time to come. I thank you for taking the challenge and as I said before....you do it so well in all you pen and this one is so very very bright with the promise of love. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Bill - Thank you for coming in to read. And for leaving the nicest of replies as you always do. You definately don't have to worry about me not writing.. I don't think that is a remote possibility in my life Mark - You leave me speechless with your so kind words. Thank you so much for you wonderful reply. I think you are one of the few people that can actually make me speechless...lol |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
RP..this is a very emotionally strong poem.. very well expressed... its simply beautiful!!! and the vase design pulled it all together.. great job.... take care jm |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
GREAT job! Your words here are beautiful.......A lovely read. Jenn E |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
I like this one too! Very nice! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Janet, Jenn, and insect Thank you all for your kind words.. |
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