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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2000-09-23 09:37 PM


Diamond In The Rough

*
*
I’m so
Thankful for
This love you give
You complete my heart
You fill me with a happiness
The most talented of poets
Couldn’t express the joy
I feel churning inside
That you give
To me
*

**

*
In your
Loving warm
Eyes I see my future
Shimmering so brightly
Like a diamond in the rough
Shines brightly inside my
Growing, thankful heart
The rest of my life
I will always
Love you
*
*


© Copyright 2000 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-09-23 10:31 PM


very nice, rosepetals...

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


Mark Bohannan
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2 posted 2000-09-24 12:30 PM


Have I said thanks to you yet?  Yeppers but never enough for a gem of a poet such as yourself.  Wonderfully done and as my sweet butterfly has told you....extra credit will get you far.  She told you in HER way...honest...she is just trying to figure out how to get out of my challenge.LOL
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3 posted 2000-09-24 12:46 PM


Mark - You know.. with all your wonderful compliments my ego may explode     hehe Thank you again!  

And Butterflies..thank you for stopping in   BUT no avoiding the challange! Get busy young lady!  

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 09-24-2000).]

Jenn E
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4 posted 2000-09-24 01:36 AM


This sparkles like a diamond........as does all you write......
Jenn E

Kethry
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5 posted 2000-09-24 05:33 AM


Rp,
This is brilliant and polished. Well done.
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

rosepetals25
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6 posted 2000-09-24 09:34 AM


Jenn - You are so sweet Thank you.

Kethry - Thank you Coming from you (seeing you reply to Mark's challange and loved it as siad in my reply)that is a huge compliment

Sunnyone
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7 posted 2000-09-24 09:45 AM



rosepetals....
               This struck me as beautiful the first time I saw it, and now the words are even more special.  It amazes me how the graphics turned out so perfect!!!
              Great job here, my friend!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



rosepetals25
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8 posted 2000-09-24 08:46 PM


Sunny - Believe me.. the graphic part wasn't easy..lol.  But I had fun doing it
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9 posted 2000-09-24 11:20 PM


Nice!
I love opening up these beautiful poems.

rosepetals25
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10 posted 2000-09-24 11:23 PM


insect -   Thanks for stopping to visit
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