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To My Friend Bonnie
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To My Friend Bonnie |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
jaunting with love forever evolve, watching her soul blossom from a bulb everlasting friendship is all we knew, unbroken is our love in good and bad times too relinquish our deepest thoughts for any reason, confident there will be no act of treason ecstasy is reached and our hearts do swoon as we declare our friendship in the light of the moon merry we will be when we save enough money, we will travel the sea and share our love in Hawaii yes she is beautiful in smiles and tears, she has a compassionate soul that I will always revere forever lost my heart to that skillful thief, our friendship grows like the life of a coral reef over any obstacle with the agility of a deer, so long as we’re together there is nothing we fear rattled when I’m away, I feel I will die, so I call her on the phone just to say hi each day that passes we will always be sure that our friendship will forever, forever endure very distraught for she has moved again, well even with that distance it will never be la fin every time I miss her so much, I wish I were dead, into my truck I’ll hop and to San Antonio I’ll head realizing the sadness I feel these days, I just remind myself it’s in our hearts where our love lays jlocke Love is the law, love under will. [This message has been edited by jlocke (edited 09-23-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Excellent acrostic and not only in format but in content as well. You are shining in this "double" acrostic. I still need to try one of these and the more I read the more I want to try so please keep em coming. |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
Thank you Mark, This is my second attempt at a double acrostic. Your kind words and encouragement are always appreciated. Love is the law, love under will. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This is so sweet! And a double acrostic too! I hope you get together soon! Great job on the acrostic, you're braver than I! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
They say that absence makes the heart grow fonder. Your words show you have a tender heart. Very nicely done!! |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
WhtDove & Inot2B, Thank you very much. Love is the law, love under will. |
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