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April Gress
New Member

since 2000-09-23

Posts 6

0 posted 2000-09-23 03:18 PM

To see what I see,
And to have been where I’ve been;
Is to feel what I feel,
In my heart.

To love as I once loved,
And to be left as I was;
Is to know what I think,
In my mind.

To live in my soul,
And to show what I show;
Is to know of the pain,
Inside.

11-17-1998

jlocke
Member

since 2000-09-10

Posts 169
CC,TX

1 posted 2000-09-23 03:19 PM

This poet, my best friend, does not have access to the internet; however, I told her of this wonderful community and she asked me to submit three of her poems, this one and two others, which I have along with this same message. I have set up an e-mail account for her, which I will check daily, incase there is anything you wish to communicate directly to her. I will print out all replies and e-mails then deliver them to her.< !signature-->

Love is the law, love under will.

[This message has been edited by jlocke (edited 09-25-2000).]

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

2 posted 2000-09-23 03:24 PM

And to let us know you pen from your heart as this is the third one of yours I have read and I do so love the way share your soul. You have a talent that needs to shine and I for one am glad that you have a friend willing to go that extra mile so you may share with us.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2000-09-24 07:00 AM

This beautiful piece shows real talent.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

4 posted 2000-09-24 08:13 AM

This is an excellant beautifull poem, you have a soul which shines. This is where you belong in a world of poets who each and every one have a talent that is truly awesome. Take care
Marsha

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

5 posted 2000-09-24 10:50 PM

April this is a FANTASTIC piece of poetry...
this is the first of yours that I have read and hope to read many others..

thanks for submitting and thank you jlocke for bringing this here to us..

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

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