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Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

0 posted 2000-09-23 02:04 PM

If tomorrow never comes for me
Leaving behind what’s true
Outpouring from my soul will be
Vestiges of my heart for you
Evoking what I never said
Yet feelings you already knew
Of the most important my love
Undying, my love you

~Sheri

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-09-23 02:36 PM

Lovely acrostic and so complete in it's message. So glad that you reposted it.

Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite

since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

2 posted 2000-09-23 03:33 PM

I'm a sucker for a good acrostic - - so you know I liked this

~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning.

~ Billy Wilder

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-09-23 04:39 PM

had to read this beauty based on the cool title alone...
great cadence and flow to this...smooth
and so few perfectly chosen lines ...
express so much emotion
wonderful work Sheri..
so nice to have a post from you
take care
jm

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

4 posted 2000-09-23 08:03 PM

This is simply beautiful Sheri

Rex

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

5 posted 2000-09-24 01:44 AM

Mark... I'm glad you think so, complete is what I was shooting for in few words.
Many thanks to you.

Wilfred... So glad that you took the time to read this. It was my first attempt at an acrostic. I'm tickled you enjoyed. Thank you.

JM... Glad that the tittle caught your eye, and I'm so glad that you like this one. Thrilled to see you back even if it's for a quick hello.

Hugs

Rex... Thank You... I have perfect insperation.

Great big hugs to you all for takinig the time to read and reply. ~*Smile*~

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~Sheri

[This message has been edited by Irie (edited 09-24-2000).]

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2000-09-25 07:50 PM

A shameless bump because I really like this one Irie. . .

Just wonderful. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

7 posted 2000-09-26 01:42 AM

Thanks for the ride to the top Sven....
I'm happy to know you like this so much.
It's hard to say so much when one's limited.
I have much more respect for those who do acrostics, and do them so well!

~Sheri

BirdeeB
Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 106
USA

8 posted 2000-09-26 01:46 AM

I agree with all the others. To express something as deep as love is hard..but you managed very well
BirdeeB

"So don't judge me by my failures, only by my dreams" SR71

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