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kevinsmommy99
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since 2000-09-23
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0 posted 2000-09-23 12:39 PM


my head is in my hands
tears rolling down my cheeks
thinking of you
try to stop the pain
hide it from everyone and act brave
inside i'm torn up
thinking of you
how i believed your lies
i wanted so badly for it to be true
my heart deceived my mind
now it's paying the price
thinking of you
begging you to stay
what a fool i was, hoping you loved me
hopes trampled into nothing
thinking of you and realizing
i meant nothing
i mean nothing
yet still,
i'm thinking of you



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-09-23 01:21 PM


KM~
Welcome to Passions where we dispense a lot of *HUGS*.
You are somebody to us -
YOU ARE A POET ... that makes you special in our book ! !
Hope you will continue to visit with us and
share in some of the lovely thoughts of this
circle of friendship.

Take my hand .... glad you're here.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-09-23 01:40 PM




to Passions and I hope you stay for a long time.  As Marge said...you ARE a poet and poets get many hugs around here and are very fondly THOUGHT of ALWAYS.  So stick around as you have shown in your 1st piece to us that you have MUCH to offer and share.

Irie
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
3 posted 2000-09-23 01:46 PM


Welcome to passions KevinsMommy, and again many hugs.
Funny how we can be ground into the dirt and still find ourselves caring and loving that foot that stomped on us.
I find that it all falls back on love. You loved, there for, you think of and miss.  


~Sheri

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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Illinois
4 posted 2000-09-23 03:48 PM


Oh do I know where you're coming from on this. Been there myself. It does hurt so deep down, and don't we always still think of them.

You're just a caring, loving, trusting soul.
(there's nothing wrong with that)  It's their loss!!

Welcome to Passions!!   I hope the sun comes out again, and the pain soon leaves to the shadows.

Please check your email for a special greeting!

<*\\\><

I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

5 posted 2000-09-23 05:00 PM


Welcome to Passions!
Here, you will find caring people who write fantastic poetry and we're glad to have you.

Kathleen


kaile
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singapore
6 posted 2000-10-05 02:03 PM


welcome to passions!

i liked the raw honesty of your first post and will be looking forward to reading more

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