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PeterPeter
Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 30
British, London

0 posted 2000-09-23 11:31 AM


Regal Swans

Look into my eyes
What do you see?
Something on this planet
So peaceful
So free

Moving in gentle glides
Not big fast strides
Have patience
Have time
With all mankind

Slow down
Glide along
In peace
In harmony
With me

PP 20.06.00




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Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2000-09-23 04:44 PM



I love this one, as much as I love swans!!
It's peaceful and graceful, and glides
along with grace.
                  Such an enjoyable read!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
2 posted 2000-09-28 10:44 PM



PeterPeter-
   This is very nice.    Enjoyable read.

   -vicky



"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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