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Lady Fire
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Lady Fire |
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PeterPeter Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 30British, London |
Lady Fire What is it that attracts? To a burning fire How does one describe That single desire To watch in silence As flames grow higher You are a Lady Lady fire Feminine affection Glows, from orange flame. We stare captivated And must refrain. For if misused Fires scars remain You are a Lady Lady fire Sit round with friends See the shimmering sight Yellow, orange, reds and blue All blend together One light You are a Lady Lady fire Arms round a loved one So tight, so warm What more can one want? Until night becomes dawn You are a Lady Lady fire |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Can't think of one damn thing one could want more than this. Excellent penning from you today. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
An intriguing poem. I like it very much.  |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written... enjoyed. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
loved the comparsion of a lady to passionate fire..thank you for sharing  |
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