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25 posted 10-16-2000 11:34 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Dove, the rhyme just flowed and the imagery weaved within each verse captured the season in all its beauty!

Coco
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26 posted 10-17-2000 09:52 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Beautiful work. Fall is one of my favorite times and you captured it so well. I'm glad I live somewhere where fall really happens.  

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Rebecca~I saw an Explorer today with the licence plate that said Wht Dove..of course I thought of you! Now as for this beautiful Fall poem of yours.......I LOVE IT!! The leaves are changing here too and it's almost cold enough at night for a fire, not yet, but almost!   -SEA
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28 posted 10-17-2000 10:02 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

dovey, unlike the leaves, your colors will never fade....very nice writing
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Rebecca-
   This is beautiful...you've painted a
   wonderfully colorful picture of Fall
   here.  No true Fall here in Phoenix,
   so this poem was a nice change of pace.    

   -vicky





"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes






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30 posted 10-21-2000 08:19 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thank you all from one exhausted dove.
I appreciate all of you!

Susan, maybe I should get one huh?    Thanks doll!

Balladeer you always get me   (blushing) Thank you for your sweetness!
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a beautiful scene
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32 posted 08-20-2005 01:12 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Good grief her words are missed, this was simply a beautiful bit of seeing the colors of fall coming.
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