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The Way I See You
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The Way I See You |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“THE WAY I SEE YOU” I see you standing there, just like a picture, you’re tall and beautiful, and smiling with grace… Gazing out over, that sleepy time meadow, when you look like this, I will follow you anyplace… I stare into your lovely, piercing blue eyes, observing them, as they perform their dance… The reason is, we are so very happy, being together, in this very special romance… I see lips that are red, soft, and tender, attractive, and wonderful, just begging to be kissed… Adornment can be, my only answer, for you are to me, so very sensual… You pout at times, and then you mimic, amazing to me, but to your heart, content… How you have captured, all of my being, and I say please do, for you have my consent… When you speak, you have this accent, that stimulates, and to me sounds sexy… It sounds like, well it sounds just like you, and it makes my timid heart, so very achy… Your voice is also, so soft and tender, like nothing that, I have ever heard… When I hear you, speak like this, it’s always on my mind, even afterward… You say many, tender things to me, like “I’m glad we met”, and other things sweet… And when I hear, your touching words like this, I feel all of these big thumps, think it’s my heartbeat… You share soft thoughts, of your love for me, and I share thoughts, of being in love with you… Sometimes my poor heart, senses that this is so deep, that it doesn’t really know, what it should do… I wonder if you’re really aware, of all that you do to me, for you are the greatest passion, that I’ve ever known… One such as you, has never come my way, I only want a chance to love you, and never to be alone… You know how I yearn, in the depths of my soul, and my heart sings a song, as it’s been born anew, So my darling, you are in the recesses of my mind, where I can perceive, “The Way I See You” Bill Charles |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gee Bill...no dedication? Bet I'd know her name... and she deserves every word! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Bill! It's Saturday morning and well.... LOL (couldn't resist) This was really touching, very tender, and delicately romantic! Beauty shines! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Good morning, Bill...... This is as beautiful as any you have written, coming from that tender heart of yours. You always make my heart smile with the beauty of your words. Love your writing.....  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well it seems that you know and see her quite well. Wonderfully written and I would have to agree from what I know. If it is for the one that I think it is then I would say you captured her well. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautifully romantic! Loved it Bill  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunshine, Thanks for coming by, and for your reply. That rhymes, don't it. Oh well, a poet now, one forever be. Thanks Sunshine. Hi WhtDove, Well, you got me, and don't forget tomorrow is Sunday morning. Thanks so much for your gracious comments, as this is one of my favorites. Hi Sunny, Thanks for your considerate comments once again. I do appreciate it. Glad that you dropped in to my place for a read. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
oh, my, my!! Mark, we need to get you to set up school and get my husband enrolled...  Whew! This would sure do the trick, fantastic writing...just the thing a lady NEEDS to hear...some lucky receiver to this lovey. marcy |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good evening Mark, Nice to see you. And I do appreciate your always so kind words about my writings. Thanks Mark, you are a friend. Good evening Poet deVine, Glad you liked this writing of mine. And thanks for coming by, I do appreciate it. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Alle'cram, Thanks for dropping in my place. And I'll send you the application for your husband if you wish. You're very gracious with your comments, and I thank you for it. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very romantic always and obviously for someone special. I always enjoy your poetry Liz |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good evening Elizabeth, Very nice to see you, and hope that things are fine with you. Thank you for your kind words about this writing. And, I always enjoy your poetry too. Bill |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Bill, So romantic You can always make my heart swoon. Not that I need to say it.. but very well done.rp25 |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Bill- When you write from your heart - you write your best poetry - it shines from this beautifully |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Bill, This is so beautiful......written from your heart...which is easy to see is filled with a lifetime of love to give.......as for who it is written for........whoever she is....this expalins her well....... Take Care Jenn E |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning rosepetals25, So nice to see you, and I want to thank you for coming by once again to read this little writing of mine. You are so very kind with your comments. Thanks rosepetals25. Good morning Wilfred, I have read many of your works, and think very highly of them. I'm glad that you came by to read one of my most favorite poems I have written, and done from the heart, as you have mentioned. Thanks Wilfred. Good morning Jenn E, You are so very gracious with your comments, and I thank you for that. It fills my heart to express myself, and then for someone to have some of those same feelings when they read my writings. As for who it is written for. It can perhaps be written for whomever it fills with joy, and makes them smile. And I appreciate it Jenn E, for coming by. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Greetings, Bill. "I wonder if you’re really aware, of all that you do to me..." No doubt she will know if/when she reads your touching poem. ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -Song of Gesture |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi chansondegeste, Thank you for taking a few minutes to read this very special poem I have written, and for your so kind comments. It is one of my most favorites. Thanks again for coming by. |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Bill "Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder" and you have captured this beautiful moment. Nicely done. didi |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Bill, has anyone ever accused you of being romantic??? This sizzles! Corinne |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi ddgoose, Thank you for coming by to read this writing of mine. And thank you for the considerate comments. Hi Corinne, Uhh, romantic, uhh, I'm not sure Corinne. Thank you for dropping in, and for your sizzling reply! |
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