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WhtDove
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0 posted 2000-09-23 08:34 AM


The temperature is dropping
As the two of us entwine
Enjoying every moment
As we're sipping on fine wine

The crackle of the fireplace
The light within your eyes
I gently trace with finger
The soft curving of your thighs

Forget the coldness outside
For the warmth is here within
As two lovers are caressing
And touching each others skin

Two souls are pressed together
In the heat of passions breath
Where coldness will not linger
Heat of passions caused its death

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I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-09-23 08:37 AM


Whtdove...and on a Saturday morning...hummm...back to the blankets I think...

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


serenity blaze
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2 posted 2000-09-23 08:39 AM


Well.  (hmmm.)  Ahem...talk to you later?  LOL...gotta love them Friday nights....sounds like somebody's toes are curling this morning...now back to bed with you!  Nothing like playing Saturday morning "tent"...*winks* and laughter for you dovie....
Bill Charles
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3 posted 2000-09-23 09:16 AM


Good morning WhtDove,
H'mmm, as Sunshine mentioned, it is Saturday morning, and well......

Bill

WhtDove
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4 posted 2000-09-23 09:36 AM


LOL as much as I wish this was not my Friday night, nor my Saturday morning!

This cold weather we're having merely inspired me. Go figure! LOL

Thanks Sunshine, Serenity   LOL, and Bill, well.....it's COLD! LOL

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I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
5 posted 2000-09-23 10:25 AM


Me thinks with this one the cold weather of a blizzard would not survive.  Talk about "HOT"...whew!!!!  I never find nights like these in my sheets....YET!!!!  Excellent way to heat up the newly opened 10.
Poet deVine
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6 posted 2000-09-23 10:44 AM


Tsk! Tsk! You almost got moved to Adult missy! LOL

This is so good...sweet and romantic..but you know what? WE still have temperatures in the 100's!!! Talk about heat!  

WhtDove
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7 posted 2000-09-23 11:48 AM


LOL Mark! I don't find them either!
But heck I'd love to try and melt the blizzard!  

Sharon good thing it didn't get finished last night, it just might have been in Adult. LOL

Send some of the heat over here, and I'll send some of this cold weather! deal?  

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I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

brian madden
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8 posted 2000-09-23 12:30 PM


Two souls are pressed together
In the heat of passions breath
Where coldness will not linger
Heat of passions caused its death

a very tender piece, sigh has me day dreaming now.

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
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9 posted 2000-09-23 12:33 PM


Becky,  
  Good job writing. You've given us the script for dispelling the cold, for sure!
(LOL..deVine's..missy,to adults)..
Love, marcy

inot2B
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10 posted 2000-09-23 02:17 PM


Keep the heat just send me some of that cold air. I'm tired of 90 temp. Can't wait for the snuggling weather!!
LoveBug
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11 posted 2000-09-23 03:52 PM


Whew!!! Turn on the air conditioner, someone!!!!



False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the diffrence.

Rex Allen McCoy
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12 posted 2000-09-23 07:21 PM


Now I was afraid of sending jokes to your mailbox ... that even hinted of anything like this ... and look who posts one where all can see
LOL
very nice

Rex

Denise
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13 posted 2000-09-23 07:24 PM


Rebecca, maybe we should show this to our husbands to give them some inspiration...do you think that would work? LOL Great poem!

Denise

WhtDove
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14 posted 2000-09-23 09:31 PM


Dream on Brian! I will    Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks Marcy, she got me with that one too  

inot2B sending that snuggling weather your way!  

LOL Krista!    

ROFL Rex! There's that dang reputation of mine again. LOL  Rex, you can send me anything you want to, I'm not offended, believe me. LOL  You need to ask Serenity about me....ROFL! She's learned a lesson or two  

Denise you think that would actually work?
ROFL!!  Thanks! Love ya and HUGS

Balladeer
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15 posted 2000-09-23 11:47 PM


uh, Dovey, er, who let this tiger out of its sweet looking cage???? My my!!! Bodies intertwined, thigh touching, WOOWEE!!!  You never cease to amaze...and I'm glad!   ya done good, dovey!!  
snowpants
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16 posted 2000-09-23 11:57 PM


Wow.  Loved it!  Definitely going to need this one for the upcoming winter months!!  Great poem!  

sp

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Jenn E
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17 posted 2000-09-24 02:16 AM


WOW! Now that my mind is wandering......Saturday night for me here...and I have had snow already......My duvet is on the bed.......Hummmmmmmm...oh yaaaaa...my man is 20 hours away and not here till November.......Grrr, guess I am on my own tonight...LOL
This was a wonderful write........I really enjoyed it.  
Jenn E

JP
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Posts 1343
Loomis, CA
18 posted 2000-09-24 02:46 AM




Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP

Most people would rather die than think; in fact, they do so.
B. Russell

tori
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19 posted 2000-09-24 11:07 AM


Dove I'm going to print this out and frame it to put over my BED..... look out Ed....lol
WhtDove
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20 posted 2000-09-24 10:54 PM


Deer glad to float your boat anytime  
Thanks  

Snowpants, I'll keep it around too, if it melts the snow LOL  

Bummer Jenn E!    I'm glad you enjoyed it though, grab him when he comes home LOL.  

(JP)

ROFL Tori! Let's see what he says about that.     LOLOLOL  You really crack me up.


Dark Angel
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21 posted 2000-10-04 07:35 PM


PHEW!!!!!  
it is soooooo hot in here Angel
WOW you certainly know how to raise the temp dontcha?  LOL  
Great poem Hon   enjoyed it muchly.  

WhtDove
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22 posted 2000-10-04 07:42 PM


In here? It must be all that coffee you're drinking LOL  

Thanks Maree!

passing shadows
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23 posted 2005-02-07 11:10 AM


beautiful
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