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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-06-10 08:56 PM


Heaven was at my door
knock knock I said come in
and so they came all seven into heaven


Knock knock I said come in and so they came
all six.
As they continued into the door
seven seemed to be forevering closing
very easily at first and then as a rush of wind.

Seven was elegant unto it's new poets
It never argued back at us
It never influenced our words,
Always pure heaven to all of us here.

We will forever love you ,
You'll not be forgotten
for our words are a token of
what we have made
A piece of heaven that fail upon us
ever so lightly
delicately caressing the keys
that made forum number seven
My little heaven.


I will miss you seven but visit your poems
for it's you that was my home and we always come back to home. Home is where the heart is.
Lovely are your words
Lovely are your strokes
Lovely are your jokes
Just everything wrapped into one.
So farewell and adieu
we all will miss you.





 

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Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
1 posted 2000-06-10 10:01 PM


this was so cute and clever. made
me smile. i will miss open number
seven as well.
take care.
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-06-11 08:03 PM


thanks Amy, I just had to respond and say how much I would miss forum seven I quite enjoyed writing here, but I know eight will be great!
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-06-11 08:11 PM


Rosebud I hope seven doesn't disappear into poetry heaven like four and five did....last time I looked they were no where to be found.  James
Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
4 posted 2000-06-12 06:30 PM


um maybe x-files has them.Stranger things have happened! lol
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