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Rosebud1229
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0 posted 06-10-2000 08:56 PM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Rosebud1229

Heaven was at my door
knock knock I said come in
and so they came all seven into heaven


Knock knock I said come in and so they came
all six.
As they continued into the door
seven seemed to be forevering closing
very easily at first and then as a rush of wind.

Seven was elegant unto it's new poets
It never argued back at us
It never influenced our words,
Always pure heaven to all of us here.

We will forever love you ,
You'll not be forgotten
for our words are a token of
what we have made
A piece of heaven that fail upon us
ever so lightly
delicately caressing the keys
that made forum number seven
My little heaven.


I will miss you seven but visit your poems
for it's you that was my home and we always come back to home. Home is where the heart is.
Lovely are your words
Lovely are your strokes
Lovely are your jokes
Just everything wrapped into one.
So farewell and adieu
we all will miss you.





 
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Aimster
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since 02-19-2000
Posts 4367
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1 posted 06-10-2000 10:01 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

this was so cute and clever. made
me smile. i will miss open number
seven as well.
take care.
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



Rosebud1229
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2 posted 06-11-2000 08:03 PM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

thanks Amy, I just had to respond and say how much I would miss forum seven I quite enjoyed writing here, but I know eight will be great!
JamesMichael
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3 posted 06-11-2000 08:11 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Rosebud I hope seven doesn't disappear into poetry heaven like four and five did....last time I looked they were no where to be found.  James
Rosebud1229
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4 posted 06-12-2000 06:30 PM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

um maybe x-files has them.Stranger things have happened! lol
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