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Softness, Sweetness and Ecstasy

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 06-10-2000 04:43 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

I wrote this on a napkin for a waitress friend of mine when I was eating breakfast the other day. I gave it to her and she said it made her day.  Don't worry, Lena is the woman I Love.

Softness, Sweetness, and Ecstasy

Maria I can't keep my eyes off of you.
Your beauty softly caresses me as early morning dew.
How could any lover hesitate
to kiss your lips
to touch your gentle fingertips.
An evening in the moonlight with you would be  softness, sweetness and ecstasy.

June10,2000

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Aimster
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1 posted 06-10-2000 04:58 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

this is SO sweet! i am sure this made
your friends day! it would make mine.
you big teddy bear you lol.
take care.
amy  


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



Kit McCallum
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2 posted 06-10-2000 08:08 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

What a lucky lady, and what a thoughtful man!  You must have made her day!  Well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit
JamesMichael
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3 posted 06-11-2000 08:14 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Amy and Kit for your wonderful response.  James
Nate Dogg
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4 posted 06-12-2000 11:46 AM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

This piece is nice, short, and sweet! Loved it!

 Nathan
JamesMichael
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Thank you Nate I appreciate your wonderful comments.  James
 
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