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StarPryncess17
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0 posted 06-10-2000 02:19 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

A girl so empty and all alone
Waiting for you to call from a pay-phone
I paged you and paged you where did you go?
I really need to talk to you- your feelings I need to know
I'm lost inside of confusion bay
My tears flow down on this sorrowful day
My heart an immense lump of stone
Why did you leave me?--Leave me all alone
The phone rings!-is it you??
NO, just some guy selling super glue.
You now have her, you don't need me
So I am the one who pays the fee
I should've known before I fell in love
That she's the one who fits the glove
Did your kind words mean anything
Or was it meant to just be a fling?
PLease be honest and tell me how you feel
To yourself and even to me, please be real.


~*~Dedicated to Chris who leaves me alone in a sea of tears swept by confusion~*~



 "Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves."
"Bleeding hearts release tears of fire"
"work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last"
© Copyright 2000 Jessica Lynn - All Rights Reserved
Aimster
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since 02-19-2000
Posts 4367
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1 posted 06-10-2000 04:53 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Jessica,
who are you girl and where did
you come from? lol. I like your style!
this poem is full of raw honesty and
sadness. i am sorry that he has left
you feeling this way and pray that you
are able to overcome this sadness with
time. i know it's hard, trust me i know.
just believe in you and keep the faith.
take care!
amy  


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



JamesMichael
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2 posted 06-10-2000 04:58 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

This is very honest and heartfelt.  I hope that the next poem you write for Chris has a happier dial tone.    James
StarPryncess17
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3 posted 06-10-2000 09:36 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

thanks for your replies guys!!  

Amy~well he is a jerk and he can kiss my cute little butt. lol j/k.   thanks for your kind words.

James~thanks, but the next poem that I wrote for chris (actually was today) is not any happier. last night I found out a lot of stuff and I for sure never want to see or talk to him again. As far as I am concerned he is out of my life FOREVER   which makes me very sad b/c I love him very much, but he has hurt me a lot and I refuse to put up with him any more. thanks for your kind words!!:0

Love Always~*~Jessica~*~
amazon_lover
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since 04-09-2000
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4 posted 06-11-2000 12:19 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi star
nice poem and from your poems i see that you're very faithful in your love but he does soemthing really bad...so say that once for all and never look back....you can find some interesting people of your liking...move on..

Sincerely
A_L
 
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