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Please (my favorite poem)

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vandana
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0 posted 06-10-2000 11:18 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana

Please me every way
you go,
Please me with your love,
Please,
Please me in every way,
Because every thing you go,
It's pleases me,
Everytime you send me flowers,
I smiled
And think of you,
You release me,
With your love on my heart,
You please me
In every way,
You please me
With your love,
I love the way you do,
You're only person
Who makes me happy ,
You make me happy
In every thing you do,
You please me
In everything you for me,
You please me in everything,
You please me,


[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 06-10-2000).]
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Sudhir Iyer
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since 04-26-2000
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1 posted 06-10-2000 11:22 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Great choice, Vandana,
Though I have not read all of your poems, this one definitely stands out to be one of the best from you I have read...

Regards, sudhir

 My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out
I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt
All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself,
Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf
Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight,
Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright
My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor
Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore
Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night,
Still there are the questions, no answers in sight
Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight,
Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright
Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor,
Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door...
You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange
You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange

~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream)
Mike
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2 posted 06-11-2000 04:04 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Very nice Vandana... one of my favorites of yours also...
 
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