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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2000-06-10 08:41 AM


Kiss me

Hon you know you really turn me on
when you stick your tongue in my mouth the way you do.
If I could have some more of those delicious kisses
I'd never need another lover
cause I would be busy spending my whole life with you.
I would be the first to say
move in with me my little sweetheart
and we could kiss a million starlit nights away.
I think it's pretty clear that I love you dear.
You could give me all the kissin I've been missin
over and over again.
One thousand years with you is as good a place as any to let our love begin.
Everytime I spend time with you I never want us to part.
You always keep me hungry for more of your tender lips to touch and melt my heart.
So kiss me once and kiss me twice
and kiss me all thru the night
Don't stop the kissin til your lips have all the kisses they want
cause I know that's love your passin out
and I want to share every kiss you got.

Jameslee@June10,2000
forlovelyLena




[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 06-10-2000).]

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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2000-06-10 11:32 AM


Sublime, delicate passion... James,
very endearing!!! and enticing...

Regards, sudhir

 My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out
I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt
All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself,
Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf
Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight,
Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright
My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor
Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore
Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night,
Still there are the questions, no answers in sight
Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight,
Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright
Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor,
Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door...
You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange
You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange

~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream)

brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
2 posted 2000-06-10 12:44 PM


Damn James....that was hot and passionate...
you deserve a kiss for that...not from me though...sing that poem to one you love and your request will be granted.



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"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers
"Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany
Culture, alienation, boredom and despair"

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.



Marina
Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
3 posted 2000-06-10 01:15 PM


James, with poetry like this....you must have her wrapped around you finger by now!!!!!  I know you would have had me!

Marina

StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
4 posted 2000-06-10 01:58 PM


Hey! I agree with Marina...Any girl would be lucky to have you!! wonderfully put! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

 "Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves."
"Bleeding hearts release tears of fire"
"work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last"

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2000-06-10 08:34 PM


Thank you Sudhir, Brian, Marina and Jessica.
Wonderful and warm comments.
Brian I got plenty of kisses last night and when I kiss her I am amazed at how she awakens my passion.  It is very sensual to kiss the only woman's lips that I really want to kiss right now.
Marina you are always so soft and sincere..the guys must melt when they are around you....I know I have a few times and it has only been thru your beautiful poetry.
Thanks hon, very much, you make me feel good.  James

Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
6 posted 2000-06-10 10:04 PM


James
sensual and beautiful. you got my
heart to melt that's for sure. miss
lena is a lucky woman and you are a
lucky man it sounds like. i wish you
both the best. take care. great poem!
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2000-06-22 07:13 AM


Thank you Amy I appreciate your nice comments...James
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