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Her Gentle View. . .

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Sven
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0 posted 06-10-2000 02:08 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

She fills my every waking moment
And my every evening dream
She heals my life's torment
And calms my heart's scream

Though I have not seen her face
Her heart takes me to a place
That exists only in my mind
A place that I have longed to find

She is my Lady, sweet Romance
And in her gentle glance
Those eyes of Caribbean blue
The man that I can be
                   comes into her gentle view. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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1 posted 06-10-2000 02:28 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Make me melt like ice-cream.

Me Sveet, sensitive, Sven...totally lovely...
Alle'cram
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2 posted 06-10-2000 03:04 AM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

Sven, You are quite the romatic!! Wonderful and sweet, melts butter! ...who ever she is....it's her loss.   Just beautiful.  marcy
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She is my Lady, sweet Romance
And in her gentle glance
Those eyes of Caribbean blue
The man that I can be
                   comes into her gentle view. . .

a wonderful poem, lovely and romantic.

Though I have not seen her face
Her heart takes me to a place
That exists only in my mind
A place that I have longed to find

I believe that dream will become a reality, it warms the lonely nights yet I know that one day I can share those lonely nights with some one.

excellent poem.




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4 posted 06-10-2000 01:35 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

I think read this a little different then Marcy.  I think she is a very lucky!  Your romantic writing never ceases to amaze me.  A challenge very well met!  Now I have to compare to all the others of course before this fair maiden can make her choose.  So many wonferful pieces to choose from you know....LOL  

I will have to get back to you!

Marina
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5 posted 06-10-2000 08:03 PM       View Profile for MagnoliaBlue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MagnoliaBlue

Oh Sven,

I love this !!

I would like to make a

suggestion...but that is so hard when you

didn't ask for a critique.

*MB zipping lip.*  

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Such romance pours from your golden pen ... well done Sven!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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7 posted 06-10-2000 08:23 PM       View Profile for nando   Email nando   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nando

Sven you romantic little devil...

Loved it, creates an atmosphere of looooooove, sweeet love...

I salute thee...

-nando-


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How very lovely and romantic!  I loved it!!

~Lorraine

 
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How beautiful Sven, you words are always a caress to the one you love, so moving, such a tribute...  You love making all the female hearts flutter don't you?

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
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Sven .. eyes of carribean blue ... this verse is so sweet
Once again you've captured the essence of romance and love so genuine
Coco  
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11 posted 06-10-2000 08:54 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

wonderful writing Sven, you show your romantic side well here.

Parker
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12 posted 06-11-2000 12:40 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you all for your wonderful comments. . . Magnolia, you had a suggestion??

I'm all ears. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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Well Sven, I have seen your pic...you can't be all ears.  

Though I have not seen her face
Her heart takes me to a place
That exists only in my mind
A place that I have longed to find

Changed to this below*still your words* it matches the rhyme sequence of the beginning four lines of your poem.

Though I have not seen her face
That exists only in my mind
Her heart takes me to a place
A place that I have longed to find

Ok Ok I will zip the lip again and take 40 lashes with a wet noodle. Sorry!

I still love your poem!

MagnoliaBlue



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14 posted 06-11-2000 01:34 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

*sigh* to be loved like that is a dream!
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Oh Sven how dreamy and romantic
very beautiful indeed sweet man of romance.
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe


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16 posted 06-12-2000 05:40 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"And in her gentle glance
Those eyes of Caribbean blue
the man that I can be
comes into her gentle view."
This poem is so gentle and romantic.  You have really shown us the softness of your heart and a look inside a womans heart. James
Sven
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Thank you all again. . .

And Magnolia, thanks for your suggestion. . . always willing to get any help that I can. . .

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--Victor Frankl

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