Tenesse Angel~ Love it! it's a wonderful poem! the ending ties in very well. keep it up! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~
"Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves." "Bleeding hearts release tears of fire" "work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last"
Netswan -- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem.
Marge -- A father without is child is truly a sad thing to witness. Thanks for your kind comments.
Brian -- Thank you so much!
nando -- That is one of my personal goals in everything I write. I want a reader to have to think and read twice. I love when the reader ponders and attempts to figure out what the poet was thinking. Thank you for reading!
Corrine -- Thank you! Praise is always best when it comes from other poets.
Jessica -- I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
"That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca