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Your Knight (Sven's Challenge)

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First__Knight
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Your Knight
~First Knight~

Let me be your Knight,
That one who holds all that you are.
Upon the breeze we will ride to that place,
That place that only you and I know.

In the meadows I walk with thoughts only of you.
I ask, "Where has my mind gone?"
You haunt me like shadows that follow the light.
My thinking is not free, nor do I want it to be.
Let me be all that I am to you,
For we have not yet become all that we are.

I come to you now in the peace that you give,
Willingly I surrender to you,
and all that you are.
I will gladly rest in your beauty,
Sit eager and await your return,
For I was made for you,
and my heart knows not another.




 It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone.  



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A Romantic Heart
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1 posted 06-09-2000 10:21 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Beautiful words thy knight has spoken,
unto thy heart as loves token,
and a painting, beautiful as his words,
my heart is listening to what the heart has spoken,
But only the soul has heard,
Lone Wolf
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2 posted 06-09-2000 10:26 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Lovely graphic to accompany the song of your heart.  So romantic and sweet.  Wonderufl writing!!  

LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
netswan
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3 posted 06-09-2000 11:49 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Lovely picture.  Hey, she looks just like
me,  NOT   lol  

This is a tender poem first_knight -
Sweet and fragile

~netswan
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4 posted 06-10-2000 01:28 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

First Knight, gentle Knight, closest to the King,
You have shown to us what makes your heart sing.
Thy passion you have shown thy love you have revealed
You have shown to all of us, the heart behind the shield

Superb Gentle Knight. . .thy picture indeed is also beautiful. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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Hm..a man that doth surrender is just
what this maiden has in mind
but if I ride a horse to you
won't I get a little behind?

Very good sir!!
First__Knight
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6 posted 06-10-2000 10:58 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Your kindness goes a long way toward this lonely heart...Thank you all

 It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone.  



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X Angel
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7 posted 06-11-2000 12:28 AM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

WOW I must say that you chose a lovely picture to accompany a lovely poem! Congratulations on a triumphant piece! If this doesn't have those other Knights quivering in their jodpurs I don't know what will!
~Heather


PS Where did you get the pic? I am always on the lookout for awesome pics to go with my poetry....I have a John William Waterhouse fave..."Siren's Song" a gorgeous mermaid!
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