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Maxine
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Untitled

I pick up the pices of a shattered heart
I lay there and cry
And now I sit here lonely
And wonder why
How your feeling just up and faded away
To why I'm still thinking about you everyday
Teardrop
One After the other
Fall from my eyes
Broken wings
I can no longer fly.


 
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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 06-10-2000 03:06 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Very tender thoughts you shared here.  If there's one thing I wish I had the talent to do, it would be to be able to read another's mind AND heart.  Would make finding that special someone so much easier.  It's so hard to sit and wonder, and try to guess....chin up!  Welcome to Passions!!
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Maxine~
A lovely thoughtful poem.
If you're looking for a title
may I suggest 'When Teardrops Fall'?
Welcome to the world of caring hearts
and talented poets here in Passions.
~*Marge*~



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Trew
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3 posted 06-10-2000 04:22 PM       View Profile for Trew   Email Trew   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trew

A very soft look into a fragile place.
Thanks for showing another new member that it can be done.
JamesMichael
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Gentle and sad thoughts...I wrote one sortof on the same subject recently and titled it "Shattered".   Reminded me of the song "As Tears go by".  Hope you are O.K.  James
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5 posted 06-10-2000 08:53 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

"broken wings i can no longer fly" Maxime, this poem is quite heartfelt and to this verse I invision another end ..
~ Strength in my soul and passion in my heart
My wings will heal and the aches shall part ~
Coco  
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