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Eternal (Svens Challenge)

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nando
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since 06-09-2000
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Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden


0 posted 06-09-2000 05:43 PM       View Profile for nando   Email nando   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nando

Eternal

"The all of this life
The everything of me
The touch of my wife
When sheŽs touching me
The beauty of youth
The wisdom of age
Sharing it all on this lifetime-stage


The promises made
The thrill of the new
The outside will fade
Like fresh fallen dew
But hear as I say
That I cherish this fall
I see inside now, loving it all"

Well I actually posted this in Svens reply, but IŽll put it out "for real" so my contribution is fulfilled...Well, for the moment anyway...

A short but powerful dedication to the one I hope I will spend the rest of my life with....

-nando-



 Ask me how to live your life, and this to you IŽll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, youŽll smile at yesterday...
© Copyright 2000 Robert Hafredal - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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since 04-26-2000
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1 posted 06-09-2000 05:48 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

nando,
Love is expressed in a very solemn way, in a very brilliant way too...

Join the band-wagon  
We are into grand wooing of the maidens here....gosh there is a wicked metal band called IRON MAIDEN ... LOL

Sven here comes another knight with a shiny armour, where are you????

Regards to you nando,
Sudhir

 My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out
I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt
All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself,
Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf
Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight,
Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright
My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor
Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore
Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night,
Still there are the questions, no answers in sight
Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight,
Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright
Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor,
Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door...
You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange
You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange

~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream)
nando
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Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden


2 posted 06-10-2000 06:28 AM       View Profile for nando   Email nando   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nando

Thanx Sudhir, you make my day...

i salute thee...

-nando-


 Ask me how to live your life, and this to you IŽll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, youŽll smile at yesterday...
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


3 posted 06-10-2000 06:48 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

beautiful words, a knight who loves the inside..for the outside will fade away, strong words of wisdom and truth! nando...  Welcome to passions!

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 06-10-2000).]
nando
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Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden


4 posted 06-10-2000 10:52 AM       View Profile for nando   Email nando   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nando

Thank you "A Romantic Heart"

Sometimes I wonder whether life, or at least love, would be more fair if everyone was blind...

I Appretiate your point of view, and hope you will comment on my poems in the future too, IŽm really wery NEW here...

THANX
-nando-


 Ask me how to live your life, and this to you IŽll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, youŽll smile at yesterday...
Sven
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Lansing, MI USA


5 posted 06-10-2000 12:07 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Welcome Brave Knight Nando from the land to the North
We are glad to have you along as we ventrue forth!
This joust welcomes all Knights who pursue Romance
For we know that it's worth just one chance.

Thy poem has spoken of many a Brave Knights dream
To pledge himself to one that he would call his Queen
To take her in his arms and hold her for all time
Is a dream for which all Knights surely do pine. . .

-------------------------------------------------------



 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

brian madden
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since 05-06-2000
Posts 4532
ireland


6 posted 06-10-2000 02:05 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

A wonderful and lovely poem.
very romantic.

The promises made
The thrill of the new
The outside will fade
Like fresh fallen dew



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"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers
"Outside open mouthed crowds Pass each other as if they're drugged
Down pale corridors of routine Where life falls unatoned "

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.



nando
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Posts 90
Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden


7 posted 06-10-2000 06:03 PM       View Profile for nando   Email nando   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nando

Thanx

Sven: your poetic abilities amaze me, thank you for your "reply-poem"

Brian: Thanx for comments and the extra verse you added, we could be a team

-nando-


 Ask me how to live your life, and this to you IŽll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, youŽll smile at yesterday...
JamesMichael
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since 11-16-1999
Posts 31622
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


8 posted 06-12-2000 05:54 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Magnificant writing...love the flow, the romance, the hope, and the beauty of this. James
 
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