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Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

0 posted 2000-06-09 05:16 PM


I've decided to do like a week-worth of reposts because I'm not ready to put out any new stuff yet. Enjoy!!

The time in life,
when yuu find out what you're made of.
It could mean whether or not,
if you're in the right club.
It's the time in life,
when you made that one choice,
and wondered whether or not,
it would be your last voice,
to make some noise.
In life,
I know that I want to be sucessful, happy,
living comfortable, and married.
I try to live my life by the Bible,
so that my life would be more delightful
because, I don't want to stumble, crumble,
or bust like a bubble.
When I die, I hope to find myself in heaven,
just like my deceased friend Kevin,
who died at the tender age of eleven
but it's up to God,
to decide my moment of truth.
So as I continue, to live my life,
as a socially-conscious youth,
I am living proof,
that you can suceed,
in whatever you put your mind to.
Nevertheless,
as time progress,
I will continue to strive for sucess.
One day I believe,
that God will see,
through for me,
as I pursue,
to meet,
my moment of truth.

 Nathan

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amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
1 posted 2000-06-09 05:18 PM


Hi Nate
Rightly said ...strive for success in the right path and never yield. words of wisdom brightly shone..

Sincerely
A_L

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
2 posted 2000-06-12 11:45 AM


Thank you for that lovely post!

 Nathan

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-06-12 05:35 PM


"but it's up to God to decide my moment of truth."  Excellent writing Nate.  Loved the title and the message.   James
Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
4 posted 2000-06-13 04:53 PM


Thank you James for your nice comments.

 Nathan

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