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Sven's challenge... Can I play too?

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Wicked Witch of the East
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0 posted 06-09-2000 04:51 PM       View Profile for Wicked Witch of the East   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wicked Witch of the East

I take you gently in my arms, and feel your warm embrace,
As light of heaven's stars above, shines down upon your face,
I see the glow of all my dreams, within your beauty there,
And touch upon moon's silver beams, as stroke your silken hair.

I hear sweet music of the muse, we dance throughout the night,
Free as the summer winds that blow, our hearts as one unite,
You are my goddess, Aphrodite, you touch within my soul,
And leave therein a satin bloom, a rose that makes me whole.

I feel the splendor of the night, as hear your siren's song,
Breathing in your fragrant scent, I capture all I long,
For time stands still, my Venus fair, while I am in your arms,
The moon itself, in sky above, cedes to your beauteous charms.

My eyes drink of your loveliness, soft grace of supple limb,
Sweet creature of the welkin blue, angelic seraphim,
I kiss the smoothness of your skin, as gaze into your eyes,
With soft caress, on feathered wings, I float upon night's skies.

The morning star, you are the night, we dance 'cross heaven's floor,
Upon the clouds on winds of time, my darling Terpsichore,
I sing to your love's madrigal, I'll love you ever more,
I whisper softly to the wind, I love you evermore.

[This message has been edited by Wicked Witch of the East (edited 06-09-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Wicked Witch of the East - All Rights Reserved
Munda
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1 posted 06-09-2000 05:01 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Ahhhhhhhhhhh......awesome ! Sigh..........
Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 06-09-2000 05:18 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

...of the east,
it is confirmed, you are wicked no more...maybe you never were....
great piece of poetry... emotional, lilting, haunting and melodic... I am impressed, lets see if the maidens are!!!!

Regards, sudhir

 My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out
I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt
All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself,
Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf
Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight,
Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright
My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor
Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore
Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night,
Still there are the questions, no answers in sight
Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight,
Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright
Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor,
Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door...
You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange
You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange

~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream)


[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 06-09-2000).]
Colin
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3 posted 06-09-2000 06:10 PM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Colin

Sir Eric humbly removes his helm and kneels before thee in awe. Beautiful work!

An open-mouthed Eric.
Martie
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4 posted 06-09-2000 06:16 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Oh, to be captured by the charm of such a wicked witch, me thinks I would be in paradise and all the stars a blazing would be in my eyes with one magic poet's touch.

Did I mention that this poem rocks?
Tara Simms
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5 posted 06-09-2000 06:29 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

This is lovely!  
ethome
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6 posted 06-09-2000 07:11 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Hats off to you, not so wicked, great work, very intimate and endearing, full of passion.
MagnoliaBlue
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7 posted 06-09-2000 08:24 PM       View Profile for MagnoliaBlue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MagnoliaBlue

Hey Wicked...

Lovely Poem...made me all a'twitter.  

MagnoliaBlue


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I love you!
Your Lady June*~
Lone Wolf
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8 posted 06-09-2000 09:06 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

This is absolutely wonderful!!  So romantic and heartfelt!!!  I loved it!!  Great job with Sven's challenge!!  
LW


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--Michael W. Smith
netswan
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9 posted 06-10-2000 12:40 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Oh, yes, Wicked, you can play, too!

My what a gorgeous poem. So, sweet so
loving and touching ----my my my and
so well written.

~netswan
wayoutwalt
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10 posted 06-10-2000 12:42 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

superb for sure yuh well written wicked lil boy
Sven
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11 posted 06-10-2000 01:22 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Witch of the East, thy magic has indeed left many hearts aflutter
This poem is very good. . . and know that I have not stuttered!!
Thy spell hast thou cast, thy magic thou hast woven
I believe that thou shalt leave with the woman thou hast chosen

SUPERB!!!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Poet deVine
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12 posted 06-10-2000 01:38 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Oh! My! The heart doth flutter
at reading these tender verses
but I have vowed not to choose
no matter how my heart curses


(WHEW! THIS is wonderful!!) I'll be back!
X Angel
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13 posted 06-11-2000 12:33 AM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

Beautiful, beautiful, absolutely splendiferous!
The wording, phrases and feeling you used in this poem were passionate, loving and tender.
I am most swept away by this.....but not completely!! *wink*

~Heather
Wicked Witch of the East
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14 posted 06-11-2000 04:50 PM       View Profile for Wicked Witch of the East   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wicked Witch of the East

Thanks for letting me play...
and I appreciate the overly generous and gracious comments.
Andrew Scott
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15 posted 06-11-2000 06:27 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Oh Most Wicked One of the Eastern reaches
Your words from your romantic heart beseaches
Passion from the truest lover's touch.
I didn't know you cared for Ian all that much.  

(Well done Wicked One!... please excuse Monkey Boy for having his fun.  Peace!)
Wicked Witch of the East
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16 posted 06-16-2000 06:17 PM       View Profile for Wicked Witch of the East   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wicked Witch of the East

Now wait a minute here Monkey boy... you leave Ian out of this...  Ian is European as you well know...and isn't much into chimps... hehe
poetFemmeFatale
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17 posted 06-17-2000 11:00 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

** big sighs ** OH man....I do know this style all too well.     I was going to say, this has got to be the lovliest piece yet, but how could I possibly choose?  Breathless, breathless, I am.......So glad I was led to this piece.  Thank you.  Care if I print this one out sir?

"Fantasies enrich our lives to the fullest, but true satisfaction comes from creating your own story in the real world! Live out your fantasies & make a storybook with beautiful pictures for the world to enjoy! -poetFemme

 
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