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Sven's challenge... Can I play too?
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Sven's challenge... Can I play too? |
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Wicked Witch of the East Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 69
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I take you gently in my arms, and feel your warm embrace, As light of heaven's stars above, shines down upon your face, I see the glow of all my dreams, within your beauty there, And touch upon moon's silver beams, as stroke your silken hair. I hear sweet music of the muse, we dance throughout the night, Free as the summer winds that blow, our hearts as one unite, You are my goddess, Aphrodite, you touch within my soul, And leave therein a satin bloom, a rose that makes me whole. I feel the splendor of the night, as hear your siren's song, Breathing in your fragrant scent, I capture all I long, For time stands still, my Venus fair, while I am in your arms, The moon itself, in sky above, cedes to your beauteous charms. My eyes drink of your loveliness, soft grace of supple limb, Sweet creature of the welkin blue, angelic seraphim, I kiss the smoothness of your skin, as gaze into your eyes, With soft caress, on feathered wings, I float upon night's skies. The morning star, you are the night, we dance 'cross heaven's floor, Upon the clouds on winds of time, my darling Terpsichore, I sing to your love's madrigal, I'll love you ever more, I whisper softly to the wind, I love you evermore. [This message has been edited by Wicked Witch of the East (edited 06-09-2000).] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Ahhhhhhhhhhh......awesome ! Sigh.......... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
...of the east, it is confirmed, you are wicked no more...maybe you never were.... great piece of poetry... emotional, lilting, haunting and melodic... I am impressed, lets see if the maidens are!!!! Regards, sudhir< !signature--> My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself, Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night, Still there are the questions, no answers in sight Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor, Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door... You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange ~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream) [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 06-09-2000).] |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Sir Eric humbly removes his helm and kneels before thee in awe. Beautiful work! An open-mouthed Eric. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh, to be captured by the charm of such a wicked witch, me thinks I would be in paradise and all the stars a blazing would be in my eyes with one magic poet's touch. Did I mention that this poem rocks? |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
This is lovely! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hats off to you, not so wicked, great work, very intimate and endearing, full of passion. |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Hey Wicked... Lovely Poem...made me all a'twitter.  MagnoliaBlue Pay a visit to: http://cyberageadventures.com You will love it! "A poem is just an expression of my life and heart."*CJB* ~*My Skipper Jim, I love you! Your Lady June*~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This is absolutely wonderful!! So romantic and heartfelt!!! I loved it!! Great job with Sven's challenge!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Oh, yes, Wicked, you can play, too! My what a gorgeous poem. So, sweet so loving and touching ----my my my and so well written. ~netswan |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
superb for sure yuh well written wicked lil boy |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Witch of the East, thy magic has indeed left many hearts aflutter This poem is very good. . . and know that I have not stuttered!! Thy spell hast thou cast, thy magic thou hast woven I believe that thou shalt leave with the woman thou hast chosen SUPERB!!!! --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh! My! The heart doth flutter at reading these tender verses but I have vowed not to choose no matter how my heart curses (WHEW! THIS is wonderful!!) I'll be back! |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Beautiful, beautiful, absolutely splendiferous! The wording, phrases and feeling you used in this poem were passionate, loving and tender. I am most swept away by this.....but not completely!! *wink* ~Heather |
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Wicked Witch of the East Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 69 |
Thanks for letting me play... and I appreciate the overly generous and gracious comments. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Oh Most Wicked One of the Eastern reaches Your words from your romantic heart beseaches Passion from the truest lover's touch. I didn't know you cared for Ian all that much. (Well done Wicked One!... please excuse Monkey Boy for having his fun. Peace!) |
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Wicked Witch of the East Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 69 |
Now wait a minute here Monkey boy... you leave Ian out of this... Ian is European as you well know...and isn't much into chimps... hehe |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
** big sighs ** OH man....I do know this style all too well.  I was going to say, this has got to be the lovliest piece yet, but how could I possibly choose? Breathless, breathless, I am.......So glad I was led to this piece. Thank you. Care if I print this one out sir?"Fantasies enrich our lives to the fullest, but true satisfaction comes from creating your own story in the real world! Live out your fantasies & make a storybook with beautiful pictures for the world to enjoy! -poetFemme |
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