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DestinysCharm
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0 posted 06-09-2000 04:19 PM       View Profile for DestinysCharm   Email DestinysCharm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DestinysCharm

Ripe and Ready

We slow dance
below
the brightest
crystal ball,
two people
destined
and yet afraid.

Your eyes
longing
to ravage
all of me,
my mind
spinning
losing all control.

Your words
tingle
as you
whisper sweetly,
my rising
awareness
seeks comfort.

Your soft lips
playfully
kissing
my neck,
my inner
sensations
soaring in flight.

Your hands
gently
touching,
exploring,
my passion
exploding
like fireworks.

Your body
ripe,
and ready
for picking,
my whole self
ready
for your harvest.
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nando
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1 posted 06-09-2000 04:32 PM       View Profile for nando   Email nando   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nando

DestinysCharm...

YouŽve really captured the passion here...

A beautiful poem that makes you think about the times when nothing else really matters but the one you love and want with all your body and soul....
Loved it

-nando-


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brian madden
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2 posted 06-09-2000 04:52 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Destiny.. a wonderful poem.
beautiful images filled with passion

Your body
ripe,
and ready
for picking,
my whole self
ready
for your harvest.


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Justin Nuendo
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3 posted 06-09-2000 04:54 PM       View Profile for Justin Nuendo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justin Nuendo's Home Page   View IP for Justin Nuendo

Ahum.....wrong personality  

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First__Knight
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Oh my.....Ready for the Harvest........My dear who might be the farmer?  LOL  This is very lovely  

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Munda
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5 posted 06-10-2000 04:36 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

What a wonderful and passionate poem ! Love it !
DestinysCharm
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6 posted 06-10-2000 10:55 AM       View Profile for DestinysCharm   Email DestinysCharm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DestinysCharm

nando, Thanks for your delightful reply.

Brian, Thank you very much, glad you enjoyed.

Justin, Thanks for stopping by.

First_Knight, Thanks for reading, and replying, glad you enjoyed it.
Only I know the farmer. ~smiles~

Munda, Wow, you love it, thank you very much.
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7 posted 06-10-2000 04:57 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Destiny~
Very, very nicely said.
Enjoyed the read.
~*Marge*~


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DestinysCharm
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8 posted 06-11-2000 09:17 AM       View Profile for DestinysCharm   Email DestinysCharm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DestinysCharm

Marge, Thanks for reading and your kind reply, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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