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To Mark My 1000 Post!
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To Mark My 1000 Post! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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A man stands on the street His dreams forever shattered His wife is dead, he feels so weak Left with four kids, his heart badly tattered She struggles each and everyday With a pain she's had all her life People stop and stare, the horrible things they say Just because she is handicapped, the pain they cause twists like a knife Some of us don't even wonder Some of us don't even care Why can't we accept each other Or do we not know how? Amazing how people still think color grants supremacy Or that a disability means your weak Why can't this world unite and find harmony Love and peace is all that I seek A old man forgotten by those he loves In the nursing home he awaits his last days Wishes he would die and be taken by the Lord to up above My heart hangs heavy in so many ways Some of us don't even wonder Some of us don't even care Why can't we accept each other Or do we not know how? I wish for this Earth a connection of the heart Where people can just be without living with fears We are all God's children, each came from the same start Maybe one day the pain will stop, and so will all the tears. I wanted to thank each and every single person at this forum who has ever posted a reply to my work, read my poems,or offered me a kind word. You ALL have touched my life in some way or another. Always and forever you will be a part of me. I humbly thank you. Passions started out as something I found by mistake,while surfing the net one day.It is now a huge part of my life and brings me much joy. Much of that is due to all of you fine folks. Love, ~Amy~ "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I wish for this Earth a connection of the heart Where people can just be without living with fears We are all God's children, each came from the same start Maybe one day the pain will stop, and so will all the tears. --------------- Sunshine hits 1000!!! and does it with class, stlye, and grace this poem is awesome Amy... wonderful message. Congrats on your posting milestone... 1000 posts from you means 1000 rays of sunshine in Passions love ya girlie-girl jan |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Amy, Congrats on your 1000 WOW what a post to mark it.... ----------- Some of us don't even wonder Some of us don't even care Why can't we accept each other Or do we not know how? I wish for this Earth a connection of the heart Where people can just be without living with fears We are all God's children, each came from the same start Maybe one day the pain will stop, and so will all the tears. ----------- beautiful sentiments expressed, you are a boon to this site so divine!!! Regards Sudhir My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself, Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night, Still there are the questions, no answers in sight Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor, Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door... You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange ~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Amy thank you for the soft and lovely thoughts you have placed within this poem. May we all remember to have compassion and empathy for others. Excellent number 1000...James |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
lovely thoughts amy..worst we feel when we're not accepted...the people who fail to accept holding on to something that doesn't really exist..they're the killers...of human spirit..well putforth... Sincerely A_L |
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nando Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 87Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden |
Hey Amy... I thank you for your lovely poem. It makes you wonder if the world would be a better place if everyone was colorblind and could see beyond the shells we wear called "the color of our skin". Maybe then would we discover the beauty that lies beyond, in all our souls... I salute you  -nando- Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
What a wonderful poem with a great message! congratulaions Amy! |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Congratulations Amy on your 1000th! Excellent poem. |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Amy, I love this! I too found Passions by accident, and am so glad I did. And I'm so glad you did too. You have touched us too, you know, with poems just like this one. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Congrats on the 1000th !! Also love this meaningful poem. Ya did great! MagnoliaBlue Pay a visit to: http://cyberageadventures.com You will love it! "A poem is just an expression of my life and heart."*CJB* ~*My Skipper Jim, I love you! Your Lady June*~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Amy, Congratulations on 1000 my friend!!!! A wonderful meaningful poem you have written and shared with us to mark the occasion!! Thank you!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amy~ Hon, this is so YOU ! Congratulations on your mile-marker ! You possess a gentle spirit of caring and sharing .... glad you've touched my life. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a wonderful and meaningful poem to mark your 1000th post Amy! CONGRATULATIONS! And thank you for all "your" wonderful remarks too. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
An Excellent poem Amy and Congratulations on your 100th post. Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Wonderfully written! Congratulations on your 1000th!!! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Amy, congrats sweet poet, and a wonderful message.... that's also how I found this wonderful place... Parker |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Congratulations Amy on you 1000th post!! Wonderful poem!! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Once again I must say thanks everyone for your sweet replies. You really got this girl SMILING! Y'all are simply the BEST! love ya, amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Aimster-Congrats on 1000. This is very beautiful heartfelt piece. |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
I wish for this Earth a connection of the heart Where people can just be without living with fears We are all God's children, each came from the same start Maybe one day the pain will stop, and so will all the tears. This is so lovely! I also found this forum by accident and so glad that I did. I have a long way to go before I reach 1000, (at about 50 now) but I have been truly inspired by the beautiful work I see here! Thank you, Debbie |
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