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I Miss You

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David2
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0 posted 06-09-2000 01:48 PM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for David2

I Miss You

She waves farewell and softly fades from view
As morning raindrops pelt my windowsill.
Still one more day to sadly bid adieu
But one day more to love her as I will.
To greet the day alone with one recourse
I ache for her enchanting, limpid voice.
While firmly gripped by sadness and remorse
For one enslaved surrenders any choice.
But sure reward is patience manifest
And wait I must for just one searing kiss,
Withstanding what must be love's fiercest test
To wither in torrential heated bliss.

Each day anew I'll face this tiring plight
Until she lies beside me through the night.


© Copyright 2000 David William La Belle - All Rights Reserved
Aimster
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1 posted 06-09-2000 02:03 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~David
oh sweetie this one crys a song
of sadness. i know how this feels
my friend. just hold on tight and
keep the faith okay. some things really
are worth waiting for!
take care.
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



Janet Marie
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2 posted 06-09-2000 02:07 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

I miss you too..*smile*
this is so gorgeous in its longing and devotion...

>>And wait I must for just one searing kiss,
Withstanding what must be love's fiercest test
To wither in torrential heated bliss.<<

my goodness i hope shes not gone too long...
i fear you might self combust.

>>I ache for her enchanting, limpid voice.<<

wow what a line that is

beautiful David, truly exquisite
later-sonnet sire gator
jm
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3 posted 06-09-2000 03:04 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

David:

A worthy sonnet -- I was most impressed with the exactness of your iambic pentameter.  Rarely have I seen such flawless meter here.  Well done!  

--Kess


 YOUR LIFE IS A TEST

It is only a test ...

If this were your Actual Life, you would have been given better instructions!

nando
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4 posted 06-09-2000 04:26 PM       View Profile for nando   Email nando   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nando

David

I know how you feel...
My girl just left for the summer, and the apartment is yet again an empty place...

"Each day anew I'll face this tiring plight
Until she lies beside me through the night"

Just what Im thinking about, but its worth the wait...Trust me...

-nando-


 Ask me how to live your life, and this to you Ill say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, youll smile at yesterday...
amazon_lover
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5 posted 06-09-2000 05:45 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

nice poem to someone being missed...I miss her touch,smile,curious eyes,patient ways...she was beautiful though she found another..leaving me incomplete..
Sincerely
A_L
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 06-09-2000 05:56 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wow...David, you never dissappoint me with your works, especially not your sonnets  
emmalouise
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7 posted 06-10-2000 10:35 PM       View Profile for emmalouise   Email emmalouise   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for emmalouise

David2,

This one left me breathless.  I was utterly transported into the mind and heart of the poet.  It is bittersweet indeed to be separated from the one whom you adore and long to be with above all else.  It is during those times that one must rely on fond memories of sheer and perfect bliss...

Please do not stop adorning this site with your gorgeous words.

emma

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8 posted 06-11-2000 02:10 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

David2~
Sheer perfection of thought, meter and rhyme.
Delightful to the ear.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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JamesMichael
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9 posted 06-11-2000 08:09 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Yes I believe when you really care for someone absence can make the heart grow fonder...the desires long to share the pleasures only togetherness can bring.  James
 
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