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Just To Spend One Moment (Sven's Challenge)

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Jeffrey Carter
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0 posted 06-09-2000 10:18 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

How's this Sir Sven?


Only a sunset can equal the beauty
of that which I see in your eyes
An ocean of water could never quench
this thirst I feel for you
Whenever you're near my heart skips a beat
As the tension grows
The touch of your silken fingers sets
my body to shiver
The mere thought of my name upon your breath
is enough to make me sigh
I would give up the rest of my life
just to spend one moment in your arms



 All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

© Copyright 2000 Jeffrey D. Carter - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 06-09-2000 10:26 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

why do you guys keep asking Sven how it is-- LOL
ASK US FAIR MAIDENS HOW IT IS...
(unless of course your writing it Sven)LOL
then by all means-dont let me interrupt  

looooove those silken fingers making things quiver jeff-gator...
very nice....very  
keep those romantic poems coming gentleman.
jm


 I think I could need - this in my life
I think I'm just scared - that I know too much
I can't relate and that's a problem
I'm feeling ...
If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home
There's an awful lot of breathing room
But I can hardly move
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
cuz there's a little bit of something me...
In everything in you.
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

Colin
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2 posted 06-09-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Colin

Nicely done Jeffrey... seems we've got the fair maidens swooning all over the place!

Eric.
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3 posted 06-09-2000 11:03 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Lord Jeffrey~
I need a glass of water after
reading this one. All of a sudden
I'm quite thirsty lol. This was very
romantic and I would say definitely
met Sven's challenge. Ladies I'm enjoying
this...hope the rest of you are as well.
take care  
amy


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



Jeffrey Carter
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4 posted 06-09-2000 01:15 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Jan,

First let me say, don't make me puke...lol

secondly, thanks for the sweet reply

Eric, that was the point right?

Amy, I got kinda thirsty as I was writing it also   lol
thanx for the kind words

 All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

Sudhir Iyer
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5 posted 06-09-2000 01:22 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Hmmmmmm Jeffery, you have turned it on, my friend...

Good work,
Regards, sudhir.

 My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out
I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt
All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself,
Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf
Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight,
Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright
My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor
Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore
Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night,
Still there are the questions, no answers in sight
Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight,
Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright
Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor,
Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door...
You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange
You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange

~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream)
serenity blaze
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6 posted 06-09-2000 02:37 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

JC---the sweetness of your spirit shone with this---and left me feeling a bit---predatory?
hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 06-09-2000 05:34 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Works for me...and well too I might add  
Martie
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8 posted 06-09-2000 06:22 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Romance is in the words, penned by poets.  Well done!
brian madden
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9 posted 06-09-2000 06:41 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Jeff that was wonderful. very romantic.

 ------------------------
"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers
"Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany
Culture, alienation, boredom and despair"

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.


lorilockheart
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10 posted 06-09-2000 07:35 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

Jeffrey,
Oh to have someone say this to me!  

Good job Romeo.
Lori

 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Lone Wolf
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11 posted 06-09-2000 10:42 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Jeffrey,

Sigh....what every woman wants.  Beautiful sentiments my friend!!  I love this one!!  

LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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12 posted 06-09-2000 10:58 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Swooning my heart is beating to thy words, words that only a true knight of romance could pen, just the poem to win, the hearts of many a fair maiden Me loved it!
netswan
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13 posted 06-09-2000 11:11 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Whoooooo Jeffrey ------that lucky lady!

Wonderfully done!

~netswan
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14 posted 06-10-2000 01:31 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Sir Jeffrey has the right of it
sweet romantic verse he wrote
but I shall sit and bide my time
until I cast my vote!

Very good, Jeffrey!
X Angel
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15 posted 06-11-2000 12:30 AM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

I declare this WONDERFUL!

~Heather
JamesMichael
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16 posted 06-12-2000 05:48 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"The mere thought of my name upon your breathe is enough to make me sigh."
You have stirred me up with this line.  I love to have a woman say my name...and if she says my name while she is kissing me....James
Gemini
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17 posted 06-12-2000 10:01 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gemini

Jeffrey: Count me in the swooning category.  You're right up there with Elvis and Ben & Jerry's Ice Cream! A great piece.
 
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