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Light of My Life

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 06-09-2000 06:43 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel


Oh love
     where has the
  sunshine gone
     the warmth, the light?
  
it's dark
lonely and cold
        and I      
    need the caress
         of your flame
   over and upon
           my heart
                my skin
       my soul

   I bleed
      my love
a deep crimson
               ache


          and
      it plays a hum
  a softly haunting hum
         of breezes
        in and around my head

I sway
   to memories
      of your song
   in darkness, beneath
         the  heaven
             which once
   was ours

I pray...

  paint my life
      with golden rays
           bring back the light
       of my life.  


Angel of Darkness
9/6/00  




 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


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serenity blaze
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1 posted 06-09-2000 12:56 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Angel---this is gorgeous---I can so relate to the dark night of the soul...just beautiful, however sad.
Poertree
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2 posted 06-09-2000 01:49 PM       View Profile for Poertree   Email Poertree   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poertree

this poem reminds me so so much of someone else .... the light hasn't gone out maree its just that the main beam is focussed elsewhere right now .. soon it will come round again .. and maybe then the lighthouse mechanism will fortuitously seize up so that it stays on you for ever ...  

philip

  
Aimster
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since 02-19-2000
Posts 4367
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3 posted 06-09-2000 02:12 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~DA
as always you write your heart.
this came from a place deep deep
inside that is hurting fiercely. i
hope for you a new found happiness
and someone to love you. take care
hon.
amy  


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



Dark Angel
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4 posted 06-09-2000 06:06 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Serenity, thank you so very much.  

MP, you are so wonderful, you know that?
thanks for your sweet reply.  
Love and Hugs
Maree

Amy, thanks so much for you lovely reply.  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)




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lorilockheart
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5 posted 06-09-2000 07:47 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

This is so deep and emotional.  Writing from the heart with true emotions is tough, but the only way to do it.  Beautiful, touching words.
Lori

 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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6 posted 06-09-2000 08:43 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

DA, I agree with Poertree on this! Good way to put it. Your beam is just focused somewhere else. You certainly are writing some masterpieces my dear   Sad ones, but nontheless, masterpieces.
Dark Angel
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7 posted 06-09-2000 11:31 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Lori, yes the only way to do it, I agree.
Thank you for your lovely reply.  

Angel, masterpieces I don't think so, but thank you for the compliment. Thanks for replying, I do appreciate it so.  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


Rosebud1229
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8 posted 06-10-2000 12:06 AM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

very sad yet so beautiful. Hope sunshine warms your heart even more than yesterday.
In the darkness there is always light though it maybe dim it is still there.
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