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Light of My Life
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Light of My Life |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Oh love where has the sunshine gone the warmth, the light? it's dark lonely and cold and I need the caress of your flame over and upon my heart my skin my soul I bleed my love a deep crimson ache and it plays a hum a softly haunting hum of breezes in and around my head I sway to memories of your song in darkness, beneath the heaven which once was ours I pray... paint my life with golden rays bring back the light of my life. Angel of Darkness 9/6/00 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Angel---this is gorgeous---I can so relate to the dark night of the soul...just beautiful, however sad. |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
this poem reminds me so so much of someone else .... the light hasn't gone out maree its just that the main beam is focussed elsewhere right now .. soon it will come round again .. and maybe then the lighthouse mechanism will fortuitously seize up so that it stays on you for ever ...  philip |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~DA as always you write your heart. this came from a place deep deep inside that is hurting fiercely. i hope for you a new found happiness and someone to love you. take care hon. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Serenity, thank you so very much. MP, you are so wonderful, you know that? thanks for your sweet reply. Love and Hugs Maree Amy, thanks so much for you lovely reply. < !signature-->Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 06-09-2000).] |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
This is so deep and emotional. Writing from the heart with true emotions is tough, but the only way to do it. Beautiful, touching words. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
DA, I agree with Poertree on this! Good way to put it. Your beam is just focused somewhere else. You certainly are writing some masterpieces my dear Sad ones, but nontheless, masterpieces. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Lori, yes the only way to do it, I agree. Thank you for your lovely reply. Angel, masterpieces I don't think so, but thank you for the compliment. Thanks for replying, I do appreciate it so. Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
very sad yet so beautiful. Hope sunshine warms your heart even more than yesterday. In the darkness there is always light though it maybe dim it is still there. |
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