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desperado
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since 05-24-99
Posts 361
FT Hood,Tx


0 posted 06-09-2000 05:00 AM       View Profile for desperado   Email desperado   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for desperado


wait
juat a moment in time
freeze
the movie in your mind
put aside the whispers
filter out the doubt
look into my eyes
ignore the muted shout
don't you wish to melt away?
into the golden sun?
don't you want to wisk away,
and have a little fun?
aren't you sick of pain
and fear inside your life
all I know inside of me
I want you as my wife
I'm tired of the race
I'm ill with blank disgrace
I want the world to leave us be
I want the world to set us free
take my hand and smile
you can let those tears fall
I'll make it worth your while
and always give it all
through good and bad I'll love you
through think and thin I'll stay
from the blinking of the sun
to the fading of the day
and in the night I'll hold you
until the sun appears
I'll take away your sorrows,
and cat away your fears
so let our love combine us
and let our spirits soar
just take my hand within you
and I'll love you evermore...


 "There were times in my life
when I was going insane
tryin to walk through
the pain
when I lost my grip
and I hit the floor
yeah I thought I could leave but couldn't get out the door" - Aerosmith "Amazing"
© Copyright 2000 James Webster - All Rights Reserved
Angelwings
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since 08-27-99
Posts 229
IL, USA


1 posted 06-09-2000 05:10 AM       View Profile for Angelwings   Email Angelwings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angelwings

What a wonderful expression of your love.  I hope that the world leaves you alone and you are able to have this love in your life thank you for sharing your poem with us.  I look forward to reading more.
Dark Angel
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since 08-04-99
Posts 10270


2 posted 06-09-2000 05:15 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

*sigh* Just Beautiful!  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


Nan
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since 05-20-99
Posts 24426
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA


3 posted 06-09-2000 07:16 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Watch out, des... Your romantic side is taking over.... Lucky lady you've got there, my friend..
Dee
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since 08-19-2000
Posts 2361
Queensland, Australia


4 posted 03-21-2001 07:17 PM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

Just wanted this for my library, it's so beautiful.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Saxoness
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since 07-18-99
Posts 1176
Texas


5 posted 03-21-2001 08:41 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

*gives a this just totally makes me melt sigh* smootches to you jw

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

Cerenity
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since 02-16-2000
Posts 2712
Escondido-California


6 posted 03-21-2001 11:25 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Desperado,

Simply beautiful a keeper for sure,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


Dee
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since 08-19-2000
Posts 2361
Queensland, Australia


7 posted 08-15-2001 05:03 AM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

Just looking through my library and this gem appeared. Desperado, this is so beautiful, I had to make another comment on it.  

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

desperado
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since 05-24-99
Posts 361
FT Hood,Tx


8 posted 01-06-2002 05:40 PM       View Profile for desperado   Email desperado   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for desperado

you know Ive gotten replies andemails about this one and I just have to say thanks to all out there who read it and saved it.  it means alot to me.
james

People demand freedom of speech to make up for the freedom of thought which they avoid. --Soren Kierkegaard

Temptress
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since 06-15-99
Posts 7276
Mobile, AL


9 posted 07-07-2002 03:55 AM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

looking for missing poets.
I hope you and yours are well tonight, Des.

Enjoyed the power in this one.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

passing shadows
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since 08-26-99
Posts 46297
displaced


10 posted 01-04-2003 02:24 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

just beautiful!
Dee
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since 08-19-2000
Posts 2361
Queensland, Australia


11 posted 02-23-2008 08:31 AM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

I hope no one minds me bumping up a few of my favourites

D
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