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The Gloves Are Off ...for the poetic joust...(wayout style)

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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 06-09-2000 02:03 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for wayoutwalt

Flowers grace her ever so closely
Shades of violet and vermilion
How much would I pay to have her
Well I guess at least a million

Odes are sung with honeydew swollen
From the breasts of my beloved
And I would never kill her any way
Least not if my hands weren’t gloved

Could be she’s infinity’s song
And we’re minutes dying by her hand
And seconds are what her mother makes
When we want our chicken tasting bland

Sadly I had to remove my glove
And slap the cheek of another
Who I thought would try to win her heart
But twas only her eldest brother

She’s the chassis of a 69 ‘stang
And the motor of a GTO
She listens to OMD with me
ELO, CCR, AND, BTO

I do say  “She’s real fine my 409”
‘Though just 1 thing of 2% Windex
Is 3 times more effective then be 4
She has all 52 cards found in decks

Ode to a commode that she has scrubbed
Ode to bubbliness of her demeanor
"Dow bathroom cleaner has scrubbing bubbles"
I caress it when long since I’ve seen her

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder
When lust fills your eye gouge it out
So you can be the holder of your eyes
In which her beauty there is no doubt

One day crestfallen I read the note
Scratching the tattoo on my behind
It said dear sir that tattoo should read
You are crazy and out of your mind

Crazy, but that is what it says
And no she’s not seen my bottom
All the memories of my Guiniviere
Out of my mind but I still got ‘em




 in a canyon in a cavern excavatin for a mine
dwelt a miner forty niner and his daughter clemintine!!! yeehaw!




[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 06-10-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 06-09-2000 02:16 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder
When lust fills your eye gouge it out
So you can be the holder of your eyes
In which her beauty there is no doubt

One day crestfallen I read the note
Scratching the tattoo on my behind
It said dear sir that tattoo should read
You are crazy and out of your mind

.......

interesting as ever in the unique wayout style....WOW for yuh WayOutWalt...

Gave a jolly good twist here, lets see..

Regards, sudhir.
Ok time to leave for Pink Floyd is giving me a mad rush....

 Hey you, out there in the cold,
Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me?
Hey you, standing in the aisle,
With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me?
Hey you, don't help them to bury the light.
Don't give in without a fight.
Hey you, out there on your own,
Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me?
Hey you, with your ear against the wall,
Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me?
Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone?
Open your heart, I'm coming home....

by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall
netswan
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2 posted 06-09-2000 03:56 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Wayout you are out of it. LOL  this
is fun ----- Ya ended up being so jealous
you couldn't see the forest through the
trees so you challenged her brother. LOL
LOL  
Sorry I found this a riot.
What does that tattoo really say?

~netswan
Parker
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3 posted 06-09-2000 04:09 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Way to funny....... I vote you win walt...

Parker
Butterflies_dont_cry
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4 posted 06-09-2000 08:16 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

I'm laughing so hard.....
I give up...yuh yuh I do!!!
There's no style quite like
"wayout style"      
tracie66
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5 posted 06-09-2000 09:21 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Wayout style....yes indeedy
Way to go, had me in stitches  (ouch)
Loved it TC~
Lost Dreamer
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6 posted 06-09-2000 09:54 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Walt, You are so humorous, what a Walt way to meet the challenge, I love it, I absolutely love it!  
serenity blaze
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7 posted 06-09-2000 01:37 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

I cast my ballot here too, walt...loved it.
MagnoliaBlue
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8 posted 06-09-2000 08:32 PM       View Profile for MagnoliaBlue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MagnoliaBlue

WayOut...

I am LMAO !!  

Love it!!


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9 posted 06-09-2000 10:26 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Your my kind of guy here Walt    Now where is the local car show again .....

 It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone.

Lone Wolf
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10 posted 06-09-2000 10:29 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

ROFLMAO!!!!  Too funny, Walt!!!  A unique response to Sven's challenge....well done!!  

LW


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wayoutwalt
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11 posted 06-09-2000 11:54 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

bows and curtsies i give you all
Sven
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12 posted 06-10-2000 12:25 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Gentlemen,
          Even the jokester Walt joins the fray!
          Can you indeed by him be scared away?
          Great poem Walt, you are indeed the man!
          This here poem, should win you many fans!!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Balladeer
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13 posted 06-10-2000 12:32 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Walt, I award you the title of Master Cylinder, although I ain't sure you're running on all of yours Great job here  
Poet deVine
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14 posted 06-10-2000 01:35 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Your gloves removed, your hands are raised
in battle for maiden fair
longing thus to have her just
run fingers through your hair.


good one Walt..but I am not voting yet.
Corazon
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15 posted 06-12-2000 10:27 AM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

oh no....we have to vote....I thought we just got to sit back and enjoy....and enjoy this one I did   great writing  
JP
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16 posted 06-12-2000 11:34 AM       View Profile for JP   Email JP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JP's Home Page   View IP for JP

A smile and tip of the hat to you walt

 Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP

"Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway

linda munday
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17 posted 06-25-2000 07:14 AM       View Profile for linda munday   Email linda munday   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for linda munday

A mover and a shaker.... revvingly good.
Linda M.
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