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I Cry Out Your Name

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 06-09-2000 01:24 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel


In the still of the night
    you come to me
       of memories spent
              and all those feelings
           rush over me again
        impetuously moving
    straight to my brain
           as I cry out your
                         name -----

my hands, have let go
    but my heart never will


if my words could blanket
    the skies and fill in every
        corner and crevice
       of this earth,
                again
          this won't be enough

       my words of you
     are never ending
  they will continue to
         flow and spill
                   over and over
            from the depths
            of my
               heart

Angel of Darkness
9/6/00
    


 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


© Copyright 2000 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
SorrowsMystress
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since 04-01-2000
Posts 179
I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I do


1 posted 06-09-2000 01:28 AM       View Profile for SorrowsMystress   Email SorrowsMystress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SorrowsMystress

This is absolutely beautiful, I feel exactly what your words convey at this very moment. I long so much to hold that one person special to me, and dream about them, all the love comes flooding back, but unfortunatly for me, that can no longer happen. And as I wake up crying out his name, I know that he will never again hear it...  Thanks for sharing this peice. Made me cry, made me feel... so much passion and emotion... very good work.  I think that you have a wonderful talent and am greatful to be able to share in the readings of it.

 "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath

EagleOne
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since 03-07-2000
Posts 2858
Between a laugh and a tear...


2 posted 06-09-2000 03:44 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Wonderful Work! It always seems worst in the still of the night.

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown


Sudhir Iyer
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since 04-26-2000
Posts 7206
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium


3 posted 06-09-2000 04:03 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

if my words could blanket
    the skies and fill in every
        corner and crevice
       of this earth,
                again
          this won't be enough

.... words were never spoken truer, perhaps...

A fleeting thought with feelings, a poem constructed out of sensitve tenderness,

Angel of the dark, I salute thee......
Regards, sudhir

 My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out
I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt
All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself,
Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf
Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight,
Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright
My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor
Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore
Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night,
Still there are the questions, no answers in sight
Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight,
Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright
Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor,
Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door...
You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange
You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange

~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream)
netswan
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since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
Washington


4 posted 06-09-2000 05:23 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

How sweetly heartfelt, Dark Angel and
well written. Love sure can be painful

~netswan
Irish Rose
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since 04-06-2000
Posts 10553


5 posted 06-09-2000 09:08 AM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

God!!!!! this was fantastic

 Kathleen

"How do I love thee? Let
me count the ways.
I love thee to the depth and breadth and height
My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight
For the ends of Being and ideal Grace." Elizabeth Barrett Browning

tracie66
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since 01-18-2000
Posts 4587
Victoria, Australia


6 posted 06-09-2000 09:17 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

my hands, have to let go
  but my heart never will

What beauty these words alone have, you have written something very special here...Well done.
TC~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


narima
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since 06-09-2000
Posts 5


7 posted 06-09-2000 11:56 AM       View Profile for narima   Email narima   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for narima

wow, just last night I felt the same way. those words were exactly how i felt when I was thinking of that someone.beautifully pictured.
Poertree
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since 11-05-1999
Posts 1413
UK


8 posted 06-09-2000 01:53 PM       View Profile for Poertree   Email Poertree   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poertree

beautiful maree .. actually i think you write better in sadness ...... i therefore can't wait for your next "bad" poem ...

MP
JamesMichael
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since 11-16-1999
Posts 31622
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


9 posted 06-09-2000 03:57 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"My hands have let go but my heart never will."
This speaks for the devotion and the intensity of love.  We don't want to let go of the beauty of love yet as we do the pain of the loss of our love lingers.    James
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


10 posted 06-09-2000 05:33 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

The amount you have grown as a poet and in strength as aperson in the short time I have known you I find to be astounding. Wonderful work my friend.
Lorraine Nisbet
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since 05-18-2000
Posts 221
Jersey City, NJ USA


11 posted 06-09-2000 06:16 PM       View Profile for Lorraine Nisbet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lorraine Nisbet


Dark Angel~

my hands have let go
  but my heart never will
well said...well done!!

~Lorraine


 
A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur

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