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Scene II

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Sven
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0 posted 06-09-2000 01:12 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

I'm sure that the stars are beautiful tonight
But I'm not looking at them right now
You're the only thing that's in my sight
You really amaze me, I'm still wondering how

The moon glistens like a flame in your eyes
Casting over your face in a delicate glow
Your smile is brighter than the starry skies
Right here with you is all I want to know

The wind whispers a song through the trees
Filling my head with a wisp of jasmine sweet
You're the one who puts my mind at ease
The one who fills my life and makes it complete

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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1 posted 06-09-2000 01:31 AM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

Breathtakingly beautiful, Sven; It takes a special heart to convey these feelings and a lucky lady she is. Lovely poem.     marcy
Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 06-09-2000 01:38 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

The moon glistens like a flame in your eyes
Casting over your face in a delicate glow
...
You're the one who puts my mind at ease
The one who fills my life and makes it complete
....
If I may add...

Delicately poised, the moon in your crystalled eye winks ,
Serenely calmed, this heart of mine, sublimely blinks,
As I lay this soul's case to rest,
Symptoms of love, this is at its best.
....

Sven, you are majestic in your forays of romance and romantic poetry....lots of wishes come your way...

By the way, did I miss Scene I?  

Regards, sudhir.
I am still stuck to Pink Floyd...



 Hey you, out there in the cold,
Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me?
Hey you, standing in the aisle,
With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me?
Hey you, don't help them to bury the light.
Don't give in without a fight.
Hey you, out there on your own,
Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me?
Hey you, with your ear against the wall,
Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me?
Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone?
Open your heart, I'm coming home....

by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall


[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 06-09-2000).]
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3 posted 06-09-2000 05:01 AM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Colin

WOW! I can't keep up with this... my thinking cap's gonna explode!

Eric
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