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Forgive me

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Rhavin
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0 posted 06-09-2000 12:15 AM       View Profile for Rhavin   Email Rhavin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rhavin

As I gazed into your eyes
I saw the storm of hurt
To scared to tell me, so you lied
But that was worse

To blind or to scared
I ignored your pain
Your heart started to tear
And my mind went insane

I couldn't understand
Nor did I try
I thought it was something you planned
But I still don't know why

It has taken a long time
Mostly crying, and cursing you
But now I see the light
I just wish you knew

The pain is nearly gone
And I want you to know
That what I did was wrong
And the tears I cried for you left me soaked

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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 06-09-2000 12:29 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

this is a very thought provoking piece and i feel what you are saying well...enjoyed
 
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