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*~*~*Resplendent Light*~*~*
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*~*~*Resplendent Light*~*~* |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Creamy cotton candy puffs Drift on liquid silver skies Swirls of sweetened energy Lay bright in Heaven's eyes. Sunflower faces touch the sun Giggling with the crystal breeze Tulip notes do lightly ring And create softened harmonies. Waterfalls of an emerald hue Mumble with the fairy's song 'Neath the rolling foam of white An angel's reverie belongs. Honeyed lips caress the moon As twilight's heart takes hold Within the lace of pale stars Flowered dreams shine bold. Somewhere between what has been And what still needs to be Lays my land of resplendent light Which only I can see. *Krista Knutson* "Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You're wrong. I can see it, too, thanks to you. A beautiful, melodious piece, Alwye  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i can see it too sniff its beeyootiful |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
You opened your land of resplendent light for everyone with a poem like this! The imagery is nothing less than oustanding. Nothing less than shining beauty, my dear Abrahm Simons "In a moment lies eternity And in a kiss resides forever" - Krista Knutson my bestest friend! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful imagery Alwye. Loved it. Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krista~ Lovely ... just lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Creamy cotton candy puffs Drift on liquid silver skies Swirls of sweetened energy Lay bright in Heaven's eyes. Sunflower faces touch the sun Giggling with the crystal breeze Tulip notes do lightly ring And create softened harmonies. ---------------- what an exquisite way to start my day... this is like a ray of sunshine on my cheek lovely as always my poetice pal... later K-gator jm I think I could need - this in my life I think I'm just scared - that I know too much I can't relate and that's a problem I'm feeling ... If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home There's an awful lot of breathing room But I can hardly move If you're gone - baby you need to come home cuz there's a little bit of something me... In everything in you. ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Krista~ Beautiful poem! I love the way you put in my favorite things... space and waterfalls help to open my eyes to what you write. Wonderful job. "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
krista~ hey girl! excellent poem you got here. this one really made me smile...you are full of sunshine in this one. oh now i sound like jan, just great lol j/k. this held a lot of beautiful visual imagery in it. i felt like i was looking at different pictures and able to step into them and be a part of the scenery. thanks for making me smile. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all so much for your lovely comments, I deeply appreciate the kindness. *Krista Knutson* "Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~ |
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