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*~*~*Resplendent Light*~*~*

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Alwye
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In the space between moments


0 posted 06-08-2000 11:43 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alwye

Creamy cotton candy puffs
Drift on liquid silver skies
Swirls of sweetened energy
Lay bright in Heaven's eyes.

Sunflower faces touch the sun
Giggling with the crystal breeze
Tulip notes do lightly ring
And create softened harmonies.

Waterfalls of an emerald hue
Mumble with the fairy's song
'Neath the rolling foam of white
An angel's reverie belongs.

Honeyed lips caress the moon
As twilight's heart takes hold
Within the lace of pale stars
Flowered dreams shine bold.

Somewhere between what has been
And what still needs to be
Lays my land of resplendent light
Which only I can see.





 *Krista Knutson*

"Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~


© Copyright 2000 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
Balladeer
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1 posted 06-09-2000 12:27 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

You're wrong. I can see it, too, thanks to you. A beautiful, melodious piece, Alwye  
wayoutwalt
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2 posted 06-09-2000 12:32 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

i can see it too sniff its beeyootiful
Dusk Treader
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3 posted 06-09-2000 02:08 AM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

You opened your land of resplendent light for everyone with a poem like this!  The imagery is nothing less than oustanding. Nothing less than shining beauty, my dear  

 Abrahm Simons

"In a moment lies eternity
And in a kiss resides forever" - Krista Knutson my bestest friend!
Dark Angel
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4 posted 06-09-2000 05:12 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Beautiful imagery Alwye. Loved it.  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


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5 posted 06-09-2000 06:41 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Krista~
Lovely ... just lovely.
~*Marge*~


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6 posted 06-09-2000 10:20 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Creamy cotton candy puffs
Drift on liquid silver skies
Swirls of sweetened energy
Lay bright in Heaven's eyes.

Sunflower faces touch the sun
Giggling with the crystal breeze
Tulip notes do lightly ring
And create softened harmonies.
----------------
what an exquisite way to start my day...
this is like a ray of sunshine on my cheek
lovely as always my poetice pal...
later K-gator
jm



 I think I could need - this in my life
I think I'm just scared - that I know too much
I can't relate and that's a problem
I'm feeling ...
If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home
There's an awful lot of breathing room
But I can hardly move
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
cuz there's a little bit of something me...
In everything in you.
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

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7 posted 06-09-2000 01:14 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

Krista~

Beautiful poem!  I love the way you put in my favorite things... space and waterfalls help to open my eyes to what you write.  Wonderful job.

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
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8 posted 06-09-2000 03:54 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

krista~
hey girl! excellent poem you got here.
this one really made me smile...you are
full of sunshine in this one. oh now i
sound like jan, just great lol j/k. this
held a lot of beautiful visual imagery in
it. i felt like i was looking at different
pictures and able to step into them and be
a part of the scenery. thanks for making
me smile.
amy  


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



Alwye
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In the space between moments


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Thank you all so much for your lovely comments, I deeply appreciate the kindness.  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~


 
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