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I'm Gonna Catch ~Hell~

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Marge Tindal
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I'm Gonna Catch ~Hell~
~*Marge Tindal*~

If things keep on the way they're going
there's one thing that I'm sure on knowing
Ripping and racing,I cannot quell
this eventual collision
I'm gonna catch ~Hell~

Careening around the corner
Stuck in second gear
When ~Hell~ comes whizzing past
I'll catch up with it - don't fear

Watch out folks
Horns are blaring
Loud and long the blast
has almost got me swearing

A whirling, twirling dynamo
Twisting and shouting with squeals
A three year old in his new race car
I'm chasing ~Hell On Wheels~

Evasive maneuver in his eyes
He smiles with such appeal
Gives me that knowing little wink
I know I've just caught ~Hell~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Tennessee Angel
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1 posted 06-08-2000 11:04 PM       View Profile for Tennessee Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tennessee Angel

Oh, how cute!!    I love this one Marge!  I can tell my pen will be busy trying to keep up with you.  This may very well be one of my favorites...well, at least until I read your next one.  he he he

 "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca
Janet Marie
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2 posted 06-08-2000 11:17 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

OOOOOOOHHHHH AND I'M GONNA TELL  LOL

well just get on your bad motor scooter and ride Margie-girl.
very cute and clever poem
always a smile with you Margie-gator
later
jm

 I think I could need - this in my life
I think I'm just scared - that I know too much
I can't relate and that's a problem
I'm feeling ...
If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home
There's an awful lot of breathing room
But I can hardly move
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
cuz there's a little bit of something me...
In everything in you.
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

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3 posted 06-08-2000 11:45 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

LOL!! I can really picture this one, Marge.
devina
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4 posted 06-09-2000 01:24 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Are you sure this isn't YOUR lil race car Miss Margie???   I never know with you!!he he Very cute poem hun!!! Love Ya!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Alle'cram
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5 posted 06-09-2000 01:37 AM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

Marge, Loved it! lol
Smiled from beginning to end. Somebody gonna have to knock the grin off my face. Really fun read. I've got the scene in my head too, looks kinda familiar.  Great and fun.  marcy
ESP
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6 posted 06-09-2000 02:38 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Marge, this is hilarious!! ROTFLMAO!!! Are you sure tis not your race car?!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
wayoutwalt
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7 posted 06-09-2000 02:41 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

this be so clever love it lots
EagleOne
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8 posted 06-09-2000 03:46 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

  Loved this Marge!     

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown


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TennesseeAngel~
Tee-Hee !  This one was sheer fun. Thank you.

JanetMarie~
Glad you got a tickle out of it.

Balladeer~
You, my friend, are always there when I need you.  Thank you.  Glad I made it worth your while.  

Devina~
Giggles at you ! !
This little 'race car' belongs to an adorable little fellow that I have the pleasure of loving.  Love ya' gal.

Marcy~
I am so pleased that you can relate to the scene.  Thank you.

Lil' Lizzie~
Oh, the only racing is my heart at the precious 'little devil' that inspired this.

Walt~
Thanks.  I'm sure you can relate.

EagleOne~
Thank you.  Glad you enjoyed.
~*Marge*~





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dark Angel
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10 posted 06-09-2000 06:58 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Clever indeed Marge!! so cute, loved it.  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


Sudhir Iyer
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11 posted 06-09-2000 07:02 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Instantly, I remember HELLS BELLS by AC/DC, I dunno why, but I do...

nice work, marge, as usual...

RIDE far into the sun,
FORGET the hell, sweet one,
LET fear not be feared,
MAY no stone to upturn be spared...

LITTLE three year olds are fine,
PIECES of gold, diamond, they do shine,
PET them, pamper them, give them love,
A day will come, when they will repay you, by jove!!!

HAVE lots of fun, Marge,
Regards, sudhir.


 My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out
I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt
All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself,
Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf
Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight,
Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright
My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor
Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore
Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night,
Still there are the questions, no answers in sight
Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight,
Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright
Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor,
Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door...
You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange
You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange

~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream)
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Marge~
This is my face   loved it Marge girl
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Marge Tindal
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DarkAngel~
Thank you soooooo much.

Sudhir~
Well, for the life of me I can't figure why either !  Thanks for the read.
I sure do have fun !

Tracie~
Well .... ya' sure got a cute grin !  
Love ya'
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Danny Holloway
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14 posted 06-09-2000 01:51 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

You can't tell me you don't love EVERY minute of chasing "Hell on Wheels!"
~~cute poem~~
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15 posted 06-09-2000 03:54 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Marge our very own Easy Rider cruising on the wheels of hell. That was a hell of a poem. Continue to ride the poetic highway Marge. It is a pleasure to see in the readers side car and be taken on an amazing journey.

enough with the biker cliches. lol

great poem.



 ------------------------
"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers
"Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany
Culture, alienation, boredom and despair"

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.


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16 posted 06-09-2000 04:12 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I love this!!!!!
Corinne
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17 posted 06-09-2000 05:09 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Great ride, Marge, had a cartoon-like quality to it, the devil he don't stand a chance!

Corinne
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Ready for another ride Marge????????  Like I have always said...Drive it like you stole it    This is very cute indeed

 It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone.

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Marge~

How adorable!!
Oh, what fun!!
I love it!!

~Lorraine


 
A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur

Marge Tindal
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Danny~
This little 'hell on wheels' is the son of a friend of mine ... he's a rascal.
And, YES !  I love it !

Brian~
Thank you for your reply.

Martie~
You know that I'm glad you did.

Corinne~
The 'little devil' is just adorable.
A real charmer !

David~
LOL !  I remember the first time you used that quote .... I liked it then .... I do now.

Lorraine~
Thank you, hon.
It was FUN !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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21 posted 06-09-2000 10:14 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Marge~
     I am gonna be laughing all night long!!!  This is the cutest poem I have read in I can't remember.  (Probably since "Plastic Sturgeon"!!!)   Thank you for making my night a little brighter since I have to work late tonight!!!



Love Ya, My Friend~!!!

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
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22 posted 06-09-2000 10:23 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Marge~

Too funny!!!!  ROFLMAO too!!!!!  Thank you for a much needed laugh.  

LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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ROTFLMAO!!



What more to be said?

K
Marge Tindal
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24 posted 06-10-2000 09:22 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

TerryW~
Only a very special guy would have remembered 'Plastic Sturgeon' .. LOL !
You're special!
Love ya' too !

LoneWolf~
Glad to tickle your fancy.

Kamla~
Glad it got to you !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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