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I'm Gonna Catch ~Hell~
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I'm Gonna Catch ~Hell~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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I'm Gonna Catch ~Hell~ ~*Marge Tindal*~ If things keep on the way they're going there's one thing that I'm sure on knowing Ripping and racing,I cannot quell this eventual collision I'm gonna catch ~Hell~ Careening around the corner Stuck in second gear When ~Hell~ comes whizzing past I'll catch up with it - don't fear Watch out folks Horns are blaring Loud and long the blast has almost got me swearing A whirling, twirling dynamo Twisting and shouting with squeals A three year old in his new race car I'm chasing ~Hell On Wheels~ Evasive maneuver in his eyes He smiles with such appeal Gives me that knowing little wink I know I've just caught ~Hell~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Oh, how cute!!  I love this one Marge! I can tell my pen will be busy trying to keep up with you. This may very well be one of my favorites...well, at least until I read your next one. he he he"That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OOOOOOOHHHHH AND I'M GONNA TELL LOL well just get on your bad motor scooter and ride Margie-girl. very cute and clever poem always a smile with you Margie-gator later jm I think I could need - this in my life I think I'm just scared - that I know too much I can't relate and that's a problem I'm feeling ... If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home There's an awful lot of breathing room But I can hardly move If you're gone - baby you need to come home cuz there's a little bit of something me... In everything in you. ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
LOL!! I can really picture this one, Marge. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Are you sure this isn't YOUR lil race car Miss Margie???  I never know with you!!he he Very cute poem hun!!! Love Ya!!Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Marge, Loved it! lol Smiled from beginning to end. Somebody gonna have to knock the grin off my face. Really fun read. I've got the scene in my head too, looks kinda familiar. Great and fun. marcy |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Marge, this is hilarious!! ROTFLMAO!!! Are you sure tis not your race car?!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this be so clever love it lots |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Loved this Marge! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TennesseeAngel~ Tee-Hee ! This one was sheer fun. Thank you. JanetMarie~ Glad you got a tickle out of it. Balladeer~ You, my friend, are always there when I need you. Thank you. Glad I made it worth your while. Devina~ Giggles at you ! ! This little 'race car' belongs to an adorable little fellow that I have the pleasure of loving. Love ya' gal. Marcy~ I am so pleased that you can relate to the scene. Thank you. Lil' Lizzie~ Oh, the only racing is my heart at the precious 'little devil' that inspired this. Walt~ Thanks. I'm sure you can relate. EagleOne~ Thank you. Glad you enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Clever indeed Marge!! so cute, loved it. Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Instantly, I remember HELLS BELLS by AC/DC, I dunno why, but I do... nice work, marge, as usual... RIDE far into the sun, FORGET the hell, sweet one, LET fear not be feared, MAY no stone to upturn be spared... LITTLE three year olds are fine, PIECES of gold, diamond, they do shine, PET them, pamper them, give them love, A day will come, when they will repay you, by jove!!! HAVE lots of fun, Marge, Regards, sudhir. My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself, Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night, Still there are the questions, no answers in sight Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor, Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door... You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange ~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge~ This is my face  loved it Marge girlTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ Thank you soooooo much. Sudhir~ Well, for the life of me I can't figure why either ! Thanks for the read. I sure do have fun ! Tracie~ Well .... ya' sure got a cute grin ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
You can't tell me you don't love EVERY minute of chasing "Hell on Wheels!" ~~cute poem~~ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Marge our very own Easy Rider cruising on the wheels of hell. That was a hell of a poem. Continue to ride the poetic highway Marge. It is a pleasure to see in the readers side car and be taken on an amazing journey. enough with the biker cliches. lol great poem. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I love this!!!!! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Great ride, Marge, had a cartoon-like quality to it, the devil he don't stand a chance! Corinne |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Ready for another ride Marge???????? Like I have always said...Drive it like you stole it This is very cute indeed It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone. |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Marge~ How adorable!! Oh, what fun!! I love it!! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Danny~ This little 'hell on wheels' is the son of a friend of mine ... he's a rascal. And, YES ! I love it ! Brian~ Thank you for your reply. Martie~ You know that I'm glad you did. Corinne~ The 'little devil' is just adorable. A real charmer ! David~ LOL ! I remember the first time you used that quote .... I liked it then .... I do now. Lorraine~ Thank you, hon. It was FUN ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marge~ I am gonna be laughing all night long!!! This is the cutest poem I have read in I can't remember. (Probably since "Plastic Sturgeon"!!!) Thank you for making my night a little brighter since I have to work late tonight!!! Love Ya, My Friend~!!! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Too funny!!!! ROFLMAO too!!!!! Thank you for a much needed laugh. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
ROTFLMAO!! What more to be said? K |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TerryW~ Only a very special guy would have remembered 'Plastic Sturgeon' .. LOL ! You're special! Love ya' too ! LoneWolf~ Glad to tickle your fancy. Kamla~ Glad it got to you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Never Surrender This track of mine And limited time A house of rules and tortures Banking all the corners Escape the giant Mission defiant The cat is a thrill Near miss road kill Shift to second gear My time is near To bed and tear Evade the giant, I'm clear Nitrous treat A boost for defeat Screams of victory Hiding with trickery Make no sound Giant steps pound Never surrender I'm hell's defender There's no escape I'm bound with fate Lifted with love Placed in a sleepers glove |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Insect~ What a perfectly charming poetic reply. Thank you for taking the inspiration and riding with it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Marge, I also had a "Hell" on Wheels, now he's 8, but remember thinking, look out world, here he comes! I totally enjoyed this one. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks, hon. Easy to relate to isn't it ? They are so adorable when they are rip-racing through our hearts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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