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Jeremiah Johnson
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Brooksville, Fl, U.S


0 posted 06-08-2000 05:23 PM       View Profile for Jeremiah Johnson   Email Jeremiah Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Jeremiah Johnson

  There is love and true love
       Paths and places
Cold shoulders and smiling faces
             But,
All of which break down to the
             Core
  like the rain when it pours,
     In this life,this tour
   For you and your loved to
            Explore.
© Copyright 2000 E'Val - All Rights Reserved
kynder
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1 posted 06-08-2000 06:06 PM       View Profile for kynder   Email kynder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kynder

jeremiah, i long to read more of your work.  curious why you chose here to post your first one??  i appreciate the time you take to read others words. i have a feeling you have alot to say yourself.  welcome to passions!! dark or otherwise......

kynder

  The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


2 posted 06-08-2000 09:10 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Hello Jeremiah,

Welcome to Passions in Poetry!
And welcome to Passions in Prose.

We appreciate you posting, but since this is a prose forum, this poem doesn't belong here. I'm gonna scootch it on over to Open Poetry #7.

Please feel free to post any prose here in the future however.

Thanks,

Christopher
Nan
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Jeremiah Johnson - I saw that movie at least 10 times.... Can't resist RR... If your poetry is as good as the movie, I'll be a fan...
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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northern mountains, Idaho


4 posted 06-09-2000 03:47 AM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

Gripping and tight - this poem stung tears from my eyes.  I'm so glad you got shunted over here!  I'll be watching for you!
~ ~ ~


 The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G.

Jeremiah Johnson
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Thank you all for your replies. and keep reading my stuff i have alot on dark passions. and i'll keep reading your work.
lotharingia
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I like the way you contrast the good and the bad in life. An existence with only the one or the other would be unbearable, would it not. my opinon (my keyboad isn't woking,can yo tell?). Yes. In my opinion we should put all those bad things down to experience, it all adds to the character, to our understaning of life.

 Uta Lotharingia
"Wir wollen nicht Wert und Sinn ... wir wollen Unwert und Unsinn"
Raoul Hausmann
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7 posted 06-23-2000 12:09 AM       View Profile for Xeonox   Email Xeonox   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Xeonox

Your poems are short...put powerful. You are dangerous my friend.  

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).
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