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Journey To Fantasyland

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Eloise
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0 posted 06-08-2000 05:01 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Eloise

I hear my name whispered from afar.
I look to the skies and follow that star.
Over the clouds someone beckons to me,
As I move like a wave out in the sea.

The galaxy lights that twinkle so bright
Lead to the path of this magical night.
I never get lost, I know the way.
It's on the far side of the milky way.

Floating like a feather against the wind
To places that I've never been.
Looking around there is so much to see,
Now that my spirit has been set free.

Taking in this silver slice of heaven
As I journey on to this far away land.
Once I am there I am greeted with glee.
This fantasyland is the place to be.

© Copyright 2000 Eloise - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 06-08-2000 05:30 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Absolutley Lovely!  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


PoetasterD
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2 posted 06-08-2000 08:20 PM       View Profile for PoetasterD   Email PoetasterD   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoetasterD

Eloise,

I wish I could visit your fantasy land. It sounds like a wonderful, magical place!

Beat wishes!
Poetaster D
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3 posted 06-08-2000 08:44 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Beam me up, Eloise~
You tell an enchanted tale.
I'm on my way !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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SpitFire
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4 posted 06-08-2000 10:30 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Oh can I come???  This is so well done. Thanks for sharing it. Take care.
Eloise
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5 posted 06-09-2000 01:10 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Thank you for the lovely DarkAngel
PoetasterD, you can visit any time you like   Thanks.
Marge, SpitFire, thanks for the comments and yes you can all come.  We'll just have one big party!  LOL  
Alle'cram
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6 posted 06-09-2000 01:23 AM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

Heavenly! So light and glorious. Serene.
Really good piece.
Eloise
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7 posted 06-09-2000 08:42 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Thank you Alle1cram.
tracie66
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8 posted 06-09-2000 09:06 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Eloise~
A beautiful journey ou took me on, I love your fantasyland  
Excellent piece
TC~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Eloise
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9 posted 06-09-2000 06:39 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Thanks tracie.  Glad you enjoyed the ride  
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