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Master
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0 posted 2000-06-08 01:02 PM


Each night, I am deprived of sleep and rest
Three grueling weeks and I have just begun.
It started as a game, -- now I’m obsessed,
The cards were dealt,-- His will is left undone!
With every note my Fate is drawing near
The melody resounds in her steps
Oh Melpomene, my heart is filled with fear,
I'm tangled in my notes, -- my wicked webs.
I’m wove each line with Ariadne’s thread
My Requiem is due, I’ve lost my touch...
“Do take the ink that I’ve already bled
There’s blood in me, -- don’t hold it as a grudge!”

© Copyright 2000 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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1 posted 2000-06-08 06:05 PM


I liked this very much, well done Master!  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)



Master
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2 posted 2000-06-08 08:30 PM


Thank you Dark Angel!
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3 posted 2000-06-08 09:12 PM


Master~
Where o' where did that little muse go ?
She must be found.
Ariadne's thread will lead you out of the Labyrinth .......

~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Master
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4 posted 2000-06-08 11:13 PM


Thank you Marge, with your help she'll be mine! LOL
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