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eyesplus2
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0 posted 06-08-2000 04:52 AM       View Profile for eyesplus2   Email eyesplus2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for eyesplus2


Two start a Journey......

A Journey of discovery...
A journey of wonder


Two start a Journey...

A journey of tears...
A journey of pain

Two start a Journey...

I give you my hand for yours....
I kiss you for luck and away we go...

Two start a Journey.......To become One

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Colin
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1 posted 06-08-2000 05:15 AM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Colin

Wishing you a pleasant journey and few stumbles.

Eric.
sarahC
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2 posted 06-08-2000 08:55 AM       View Profile for sarahC   Email sarahC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sarahC

very nice and flowing...I enjoyed it!!!  
Aimster
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3 posted 06-08-2000 10:04 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

This was beautiful. I especially
enjoyed the last stanza.

"Two become One"
lovely! take care,
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



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~Ooohh,...short and sweet.  'Tis true....it is a journey. Wonderful poem. Take care. *Peace.
 
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