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eyesplus2
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since 2000-03-02
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australia

0 posted 2000-06-08 04:52 AM



Two start a Journey......

A Journey of discovery...
A journey of wonder


Two start a Journey...

A journey of tears...
A journey of pain

Two start a Journey...

I give you my hand for yours....
I kiss you for luck and away we go...

Two start a Journey.......To become One


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Colin
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England
1 posted 2000-06-08 05:15 AM


Wishing you a pleasant journey and few stumbles.

Eric.

sarahC
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since 2000-06-07
Posts 84
Michigan
2 posted 2000-06-08 08:55 AM


very nice and flowing...I enjoyed it!!!  
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
3 posted 2000-06-08 10:04 PM


This was beautiful. I especially
enjoyed the last stanza.

"Two become One"
lovely! take care,
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

4 posted 2000-06-08 10:54 PM


~Ooohh,...short and sweet.  'Tis true....it is a journey. Wonderful poem. Take care. *Peace.
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