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cheating yourself

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slipknot
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since 05-31-2000
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0 posted 06-08-2000 02:31 AM       View Profile for slipknot   Email slipknot   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for slipknot

you are back with me
but only for a while
not like before
hmmm, before it could never be.

that's what you said
as I lowered my head
you still think of me
I know you want me, I can see

it would be wrong you say
like it's nothing,
this game you continue to play
all the while I sit and wait

one day, one day you'll be back
but wait, you got a new man
you're on a different track
try and try as hard as I can

you'll never be with me
your heart's with me
and everything else
go ahead, deny your feelings, keep cheating yourself

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svtcobra
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since 05-23-2000
Posts 16
Syracuse,NY USA


1 posted 06-08-2000 02:55 AM       View Profile for svtcobra   Email svtcobra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for svtcobra

its good to see a new post bro................


keep up the emotion
Ethan Halo
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since 04-28-2000
Posts 820
on the roof again


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i liked this a lot. the sporadic rhythm and rhyme scheme reflect the emotions behind the words. very real. i dig it. keep up the good stuff.

 We all got somethin' we need to atone for.
 
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