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Starry Eyes

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Aimster
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0 posted 06-08-2000 01:14 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Aimster

Starry Eyes
Amy M. Kennedy

the stars are in your eyes
they shine so brightly at me
when im with you how my soul flies
and the heavens shine down completely

angels come down from the sky
to bask with us in our love
your eyes can see my soul as we both sigh
so precious...this love sent from above

when we make love...the universe continues to turn
lips meeting...bodies entwined
and the passion flares...and for you i yearn
as our spirts take off and begin to fly

the flame of the candle...burning so bright
as your eyes of lust and love drink me in
and i say your name in the middle of the night
and esctacy takes over...and out of control we spin

all that matters is this moment...being with you
as our bodies dance...in love, i am deep
never known a more honest moment...something more true
i close my eyes...holding you, as we fall fast asleep.


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



© Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 06-08-2000 01:24 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

very well done amy woowoo wowowow i likes it alot!
Janet Marie
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2 posted 06-08-2000 01:45 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

beautiful amy-girl

star-struck and love struck...
works for me  
love ya when your smiling
later amy-gator
jm
Ethan Halo
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3 posted 06-08-2000 02:47 AM       View Profile for Ethan Halo   Email Ethan Halo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ethan Halo's Home Page   View IP for Ethan Halo

Amy,
this is beautiful! i remember feeling this way, once. i'm very glad you have the priveledge of feeling this way with someone. it's a rarity these days. i hope you hold on to these feelings and this person for a good long time.

 We all got somethin' we need to atone for.
tracie66
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4 posted 06-08-2000 05:52 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Oh Aim such beauty in this. I love the open honesty and the intense beauty, very lovingly written little aimy girl  
Love TC~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Kit McCallum
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5 posted 06-08-2000 05:55 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

You've painted a beautiful picture of love and passion Amy ... excellent read!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Aimster
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6 posted 06-08-2000 10:35 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

thanks everyone for your nice
replies. you all continue to make
me strive to be a better poet
each and everyday...
and for that i humbly thank you.

love,
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



SpitFire
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7 posted 06-08-2000 12:51 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Amy,...so real, so beautiful.  Wow.  Thanks for the read.  Truly a great one. Take care. *Peace.
Nate Dogg
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8 posted 06-08-2000 05:16 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

This is a very beautiful and descriptive piece! Great job!

 Nathan
Dark Angel
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9 posted 06-08-2000 05:19 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Beautiful Amy,   enjoyed it muchly.

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


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