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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
your smile a warm rush similar to sinking my toes into sand basking under the sun on a long summer day your voice deep timbers raising trails of miniature dunes whispering along my flesh your kiss washing over me and I am lost floating in an endless ocean your hands strong and tender like the tides loving embrace drawing me in I am serene… I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Hi Breathe - what great imagery and such a sweet poem - well done ~netswan |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
superbly done. this flowed from beginning to end. lively imagery woven into the fabric of this piece. i truly enjoyed it. take care. amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Breathe~ So good to see you. This is powerfully moving bring the serenity of which you write. I enjoyed it very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
wow, this was GREAT. My kinda writing. Love the depth and/of emotion. Good stuff. jwesley |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Nicely done! Corinne |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very simply explained but in a beautiful artful way. Good work! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Breathe,...*sigh*,..oh so beautiful. Such a light and lovely poem. Thank you for sharing it. *Peace. |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
netswan, Aimster, jwesley, Corinne, ethome, Spitfire... Thank you so much! MARGE!! *Tackle* It's good to see you too!! I've been so swamped anymore, seems I hardly have a moment to breathe. Thank you lady! I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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