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Breathe~
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0 posted 06-07-2000 11:41 PM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Breathe~

your smile
a warm rush similar to sinking my toes
into sand basking under the sun
on a long summer day

your voice
deep timbers
raising trails of miniature dunes
whispering along my flesh

your kiss
washing over me
and I am lost
floating in an endless ocean

your hands
strong and tender
like the tides loving embrace
drawing me in

I am serene…




 I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan
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netswan
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since 03-28-2000
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1 posted 06-07-2000 11:51 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Hi Breathe - what great imagery and such
a sweet poem - well done

~netswan
Aimster
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since 02-19-2000
Posts 4367
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2 posted 06-08-2000 12:59 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

superbly done. this flowed
from beginning to end. lively
imagery woven into the fabric of
this piece. i truly enjoyed it.
take care.
amy  


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



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3 posted 06-08-2000 07:21 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Breathe~
So good to see you.
This is powerfully moving
bring the serenity of which you write.
I enjoyed it very much.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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jwesley
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since 04-30-2000
Posts 6413
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4 posted 06-08-2000 11:31 AM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

wow, this was GREAT.  My kinda writing.  Love the depth and/of emotion.  Good stuff.

jwesley
Corinne
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state of confusion


5 posted 06-08-2000 12:11 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Nicely done!

Corinne
ethome
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6 posted 06-08-2000 12:14 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Very simply explained but in a beautiful artful way. Good work!
SpitFire
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7 posted 06-08-2000 01:39 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Breathe,...*sigh*,..oh so beautiful.  Such a light and lovely poem. Thank you for sharing it. *Peace.
Breathe~
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8 posted 06-08-2000 09:04 PM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Breathe~

netswan, Aimster, jwesley, Corinne, ethome, Spitfire... Thank you so much!  

MARGE!!  *Tackle*  It's good to see you too!!  I've been so swamped anymore, seems I hardly have a moment to breathe.  Thank you lady!  



 I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan
 
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