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Rhavin
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since 2000-05-27
Posts 28


0 posted 2000-06-07 10:52 PM


The memories of a lost love linger on
It's the simple things like how I used to miss her the second she was gone
The way we used to lay in each others arms
Keeping each other away from harm

The simple things like watching "Dawson's Creek"
To the important things like leaning on each other when one was weak
So how can I tell someone I can hardly speak to
That I'm just hurt, but I really miss you


© Copyright 2000 Rhavin - All Rights Reserved
netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
1 posted 2000-06-07 11:55 PM


Aw, Rhavin. This is tender.  Well, guess
I would write a poem -- that is one
way to get a message across!

~netswan

Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
2 posted 2000-06-08 10:10 PM


i agree with netswan. poetry works
for a lot of people...it's worth a
shot. sometimes just getting our
feelings out on paper is just what we
need, even if we never send it to the
person. a wise person passed that onto me.
she knows who she is   and she was right.
sometimes our best expression comes from
just writing out our heart and feelings.
good luck and take care.
amy  


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

3 posted 2000-06-08 10:56 PM


~This poem is so touching.  So well done. Thanks for sharing. Take care. *Peace.
Colin
Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England
4 posted 2000-06-09 04:59 AM


*sigh* It's always the little things that hurt the most.... like that splinter you just CAN'T get out of your finger.

Best wishes,
Eric

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