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Lost Love Memories

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Rhavin
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since 05-27-2000
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0 posted 06-07-2000 10:52 PM       View Profile for Rhavin   Email Rhavin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rhavin

The memories of a lost love linger on
It's the simple things like how I used to miss her the second she was gone
The way we used to lay in each others arms
Keeping each other away from harm

The simple things like watching "Dawson's Creek"
To the important things like leaning on each other when one was weak
So how can I tell someone I can hardly speak to
That I'm just hurt, but I really miss you

© Copyright 2000 Rhavin - All Rights Reserved
netswan
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since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
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1 posted 06-07-2000 11:55 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Aw, Rhavin. This is tender.  Well, guess
I would write a poem -- that is one
way to get a message across!

~netswan
Aimster
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since 02-19-2000
Posts 4367
Charlotte, NC


2 posted 06-08-2000 10:10 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

i agree with netswan. poetry works
for a lot of people...it's worth a
shot. sometimes just getting our
feelings out on paper is just what we
need, even if we never send it to the
person. a wise person passed that onto me.
she knows who she is   and she was right.
sometimes our best expression comes from
just writing out our heart and feelings.
good luck and take care.
amy  


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



SpitFire
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since 04-19-2000
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3 posted 06-08-2000 10:56 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~This poem is so touching.  So well done. Thanks for sharing. Take care. *Peace.
Colin
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Callington, Cornwall, England


4 posted 06-09-2000 04:59 AM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Colin

*sigh* It's always the little things that hurt the most.... like that splinter you just CAN'T get out of your finger.

Best wishes,
Eric
 
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