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Darknes Falls

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svtcobra
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Two days later
Darkness has fallen
Must get some sleep
Must lay down now

Your scent lingers
I smell you even now
All alone I close my eyes
And suddenly you are here

Your tan flawless skin
glows from the moon light
Your expressions show
Your anticipated bliss

You are the most
Amazing woman I've
Ever been with..You can tell
By the look on my face

For hours we share
Eachothers company
Caressing and exploring
Till the early morning

Bright light
I awaken rested
Alone again
A new day has begun

Dam the light
Why must the sun rise
I long for the darkness
And ache for your company

© Copyright 2000 David J. Gassen - All Rights Reserved
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Cobra~
Anguished thoughts full of aching.
Some lovely lines in your poem.
~*Marge*~


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since 02-19-2000
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awesome poem! and boy can i relate
to this one. i haven't read any of
your work before. you write exceptionally
well and brought back a few memories for
me. thank you.
take care.
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



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