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Favorite Poem(for the challenge & it's hard to choose just one.)
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Favorite Poem(for the challenge & it's hard to choose just one.) |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
~I miss you Jim...See you later, Baby~ I miss his hands That held mine when we first said hello I miss his eyes That looked so much like mine... I miss his arms That held me in that first embrace... I miss his lips That kissed mine and trailed across my face. I miss his body That fit so well against mine... I miss his breath That quickened on my neck. I miss his voice That was so gentle in my ear... I miss his music That was so sweet and clear. I miss the odor of candles That burned in the room... I miss the dance of my Tongue entwined with his. I miss the movement Of my hands on him... I miss our being together In a room romantically dim. I miss our special Time in that little town... I miss sitting across The table from his smile. I miss our talks Our touches and our caring... I miss the smell and The taste of him…our sharing. I miss him. Ooh, how I miss him. ©1999~CJB~ Pay a visit to: http://cyberageadventures.com You will love it! "A poem is just an expression of my life and heart."*CJB* ~*My Skipper Jim, I love you! Your Lady June*~ |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
I could just cry Magnolia! There's such pain and sadness written here. Truly an expressive piece of poetry. Excellent work! "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
MB this is beautiful and very touching I know this ache...you have captured well thank you for posting to the challenge and sharing this. yes it is hard to pick just one  take care, jm I think I could need - this in my life I think I'm just scared - that I know too much I can't relate and that's a problem I'm feeling ... If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home There's an awful lot of breathing room But I can hardly move If you're gone - baby you need to come home cuz there's a little bit of something me... In everything in you. ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Rhavin Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 28 |
I loved your poem! Very powerful to say the least. Made me think back a little about missing someone too. Keep up the excellent writing. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Oh Magnolia, this is exceptional and so sad --- ~netswan |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
I can hardly type a response through all these goosebumps... This took my breath away... I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Magnolia~ wow!!! boy do i know this feeling. however i could have never captured it as elegantly as this. you write from a place that is deep and still much alive. vivid imagery tied up with both love and sadness. wow. amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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