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Favorite Poem(for the challenge & it's hard to choose just one.)

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MagnoliaBlue
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0 posted 06-07-2000 10:28 PM       View Profile for MagnoliaBlue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for MagnoliaBlue

~I miss you Jim...See you later, Baby~

I miss his hands
That held mine when we first said hello
I miss his eyes
That looked so much like mine...

I miss his arms
That held me in that first embrace...
I miss his lips
That kissed mine and trailed across my face.

I miss his body
That fit so well against mine...
I miss his breath
That quickened on my neck.

I miss his voice
That was so gentle in my ear...
I miss his music
That was so sweet and clear.

I miss the odor of candles
That burned in the room...
I miss the dance of my
Tongue entwined with his.

I miss the movement
Of my hands on him...
I miss our being together
In a room romantically dim.

I miss our special
Time in that little town...
I miss sitting across
The table from his smile.

I miss our talks
Our touches and our caring...
I miss the smell and
The taste of him…our sharing.

I miss him.
Ooh, how I miss him.


©1999~CJB~




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Tennessee Angel
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1 posted 06-07-2000 10:30 PM       View Profile for Tennessee Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tennessee Angel

I could just cry Magnolia!  There's such pain and sadness written here.  Truly an expressive piece of poetry.  Excellent work!

 "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca
Janet Marie
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2 posted 06-07-2000 10:53 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

MB
this is beautiful and very touching
I know this ache...you have captured well
thank you for posting to the challenge and sharing this.
yes it is hard to pick just one  
take care, jm

 I think I could need - this in my life
I think I'm just scared - that I know too much
I can't relate and that's a problem
I'm feeling ...
If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home
There's an awful lot of breathing room
But I can hardly move
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
cuz there's a little bit of something me...
In everything in you.
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

Rhavin
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3 posted 06-07-2000 10:57 PM       View Profile for Rhavin   Email Rhavin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rhavin

I loved your poem!  Very powerful to say the least.  Made me think back a little about missing someone too.  Keep up the excellent writing.
netswan
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4 posted 06-07-2000 11:53 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Oh Magnolia, this is exceptional and so
sad ---

~netswan
Breathe~
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5 posted 06-07-2000 11:56 PM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Breathe~

I can hardly type a response through all these goosebumps...

This took my breath away...


 I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan
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6 posted 06-08-2000 01:04 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Magnolia~

wow!!! boy do i know this feeling.
however i could have never captured
it as elegantly as this. you write from
a place that is deep and still much
alive. vivid imagery tied up with both
love and sadness. wow.
amy  


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



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