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Brand New Places (project graduation poem)

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Kevin
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0 posted 06-07-2000 10:04 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

Take a look around today
See all the shining faces
For everyone is on their way
To new exciting places

The kids you used to chase around
The old school kick ball team
Have come so far from the play ground
To realize lifelong dreams

They’ve come to be your saving grace
When life throws you a curve
And known just when to give you space
When they got on your nerves

They’ll be the ones that you recall
When smiles are in need
The ones to catch you when you fall
To help you when you plead

You’ll always have them in your heart
Locked up in hidden spaces
But now its time for us to start
our trip to brand new places

The road does not end here and now
It merely takes a turn
And roads will cross again some how
So please be not concerned

I trust I’ll see you all again
Fate’s not my enemy
We’ll talk about how we have been
And things we’ve come to see

We’ll share some casual good-byes
Perhaps a laugh or two
Then slowly break away our eyes
To things we have to do

In every life there comes a change
It’s what keeps us alive
So time decides to rearrange
It merely makes us strive

Tomorrow is another day
Filled with own special graces
So smile there’s no more to say
Your off to brand new places
© Copyright 2000 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
netswan
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since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
Washington


1 posted 06-07-2000 11:01 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

This is Fantastic Kevin ---What a great
tribute - graduation poem!
Congrats on Graduation!!!!
~netswan
Aimster
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since 02-19-2000
Posts 4367
Charlotte, NC


2 posted 06-07-2000 11:36 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Kevin~
as always your writing is
exceptional. this is a wonderful
graduation poem. you brought a tear
to my eye and made me smile. i just
graduated from college so i know these
feelings all to well. congratulations
m'friend...you have achieved a major
milestone. here's to the future!  
amy


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



Parker
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... the old black rum


3 posted 06-08-2000 05:45 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

kevin, great poem.... So are you going to recite it at the big event. Tell us how it goes. and congrats.

Parker
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4 posted 06-08-2000 05:53 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Fantastic Kevin!!  loved it  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


 
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