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Dark Angel
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0 posted 06-07-2000 09:26 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel


Today has died

As golden rays fade
twilight whispers memories
of precious love made

frolicking above the horizon
I see us through the cloud
of my cigarette
where
you
and
I
once
were
alive
to each ones touch
feelings and needs
where tomorrow didn't arrive
and today was today and not over

where thoughts are now ridiculous
and are of no worth or value
but this is tomorrow
and not yesterday
today has died


Dark Angel
8/6/00



As the Quotation says.....
This Angel....
will love you more than yesterday
and less than tomorrow
                          

  



 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)




[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 06-07-2000).]
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Poet deVine
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1 posted 06-07-2000 09:40 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Such vivid sadness.....I turned and almost could smell the smoke.. good one!  
Aimster
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2 posted 06-07-2000 10:05 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

WOW! this was intense and very
emotionally powerful. i liked the
theme even if it was a sad one. but
just remember...even though today
may have died, there is ALWAYS a
tomorrow. take care m'friend.
amy  


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



Tennessee Angel
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3 posted 06-07-2000 10:11 PM       View Profile for Tennessee Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tennessee Angel

As always, I loved reading this one!!  It was not so much sad as bittersweet.  I think that you have to hold on today only as long as is possible and then reach out for tomorrow.  There will always be a tomorrow, and there will always be a yesterday, but todays are oh so fleeting.  Great Work, once again!

 "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca
Dark Angel
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4 posted 06-08-2000 12:33 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Sharon, Aimster and TA, thanks so much for your lovely and sweet replies, I do appreciate them so.  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


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5 posted 06-08-2000 07:24 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DarkAngel~
WOW !  This is simply lovely !
So emotionally moving.
I loved the format !
Very creative, my dear.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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WhtDove
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6 posted 06-08-2000 10:00 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Girl, I don't know what it is in your sadness that brings about such exquisite poetry, but it does.


frolicking above the horizon
I see us through the cloud
of my cigarette

Love the word usage here!
SpitFire
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7 posted 06-08-2000 12:48 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Dark Angel,...thank you for sharing this part of you.  Truly a sad yet wonderfully written and displayed piece of poetry. Take care. *Peace.
Dark Angel
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8 posted 06-08-2000 05:15 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thanks Marge, glad you liked it!  

Angel thanks so much girrrl   *Ribbit*

Sppitfire, you are welcome, thanks for your lovely reply.  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


Martie
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9 posted 06-08-2000 07:16 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Your memories may be bitter ones, but I see a possitive look for tomorrow...well done, Dark Angel.
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