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Feelings( Why do they change)

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Rosebud1229
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0 posted 06-07-2000 09:03 PM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Rosebud1229

Does anyone know,why?
Feelings change so abruptly.
Seems like the way I feel changes so
consistently.
I suppose that's one thing I know stays constant.
Why do feelings change?
One minute my heart pitter patters
and then the next doesn't even flutter.
I don't know.
Do you think that it's just a pattern
of my surmise?
I really do know this.
This I can't resist.
The way you smile.
The way you touch.
The way I react to you.
This I know.
This doesn't change,
So maybe it's just I want you more.
Nothing more to say.
Except end this with a kiss
and you know just who you are.
Feelings do change this I know
but one thing I know my hearts in your hands
so be careful with my lifes most emotional part that I so passionately gave to you.




 
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Lost Dreamer
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1 posted 06-08-2000 04:47 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Very nice poem.  
amazon_lover
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2 posted 06-08-2000 05:01 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi Rose
Thats a really touching poem. When we give ourself to some person trusting she's the one it very difficult to even think of it in our dreams that she can destroy it. But when it happens pain and anger just flows without control. I've felt it and its a sh**.

Sincerely
A_L
MagnoliaBlue
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3 posted 06-08-2000 05:04 PM       View Profile for MagnoliaBlue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MagnoliaBlue

Good thoughts expressed here in this poem...

Sometimes people rush into relationships and are not entirely being themselves while doing it.

We can't resist being ourselves and so then we step back and look at who we are with...

and we see a stranger...

someone we hardly know at all.

Walk slowly, get to know someone before you offer your heart...then and only then, when it is truly the one for you...give that person your all.

Good luck!  

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ethome
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4 posted 06-08-2000 05:10 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

What a great way to start. Good hook and a very touching finish.
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